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I've written myself into a corner in my fanfic, which in spite of my secret little tickling fetish, contains very little tickling. In one of my latest ones, I did throw it in, though. It was supposed to be the end of the story, but to my surprise my readers want a description of the tickling scene.
I've never written a detailed tickling scene, despite reading hundreds of them, so I'm asking advice and opinions. What do the authors here like to write about? What do you as readers enjoy? What should be described the most, the movements of the tickler or the reaction of the ticklee? The story also contains sexual situations--smut, not to put too fine a point on it.
Just to give you an idea, this is where the story ended.
“Kerri, you're amazing, babe.”
“Are you sure it wasn't just the vibrator?” she asked, smirking a little.
“Shouldn't I be asking you that?” he teased her in return. “I'm not going to be in competition with that thing, am I?”
Kerri couldn't resist. “Hmmm. I don't know,” she pretended to muse. It was a mistake. Before she knew it, Reno was straddling her, pinning her arms with his knees. The remote was in his hand and a diabolical grin on his face.
“You know, there's something else I always wanted to try with you,” he said. “You always get wet when I tickle you, but I wonder if I can make you come while I'm doing it.”
Kerri's eyes widened in dread. “No, Reno! Please, please, no!” she begged, knowing already that it was hopeless.
“I bet I can, yo,” he said, turning the vibrator back on high. Kerri let out a helpless moan of pleasure that turned into shrieks of laughter when he lowered his long fingers to her stomach. She was all too afraid that he was right.
I've written myself into a corner in my fanfic, which in spite of my secret little tickling fetish, contains very little tickling. In one of my latest ones, I did throw it in, though. It was supposed to be the end of the story, but to my surprise my readers want a description of the tickling scene.
I've never written a detailed tickling scene, despite reading hundreds of them, so I'm asking advice and opinions. What do the authors here like to write about? What do you as readers enjoy? What should be described the most, the movements of the tickler or the reaction of the ticklee? The story also contains sexual situations--smut, not to put too fine a point on it.
Just to give you an idea, this is where the story ended.
“Kerri, you're amazing, babe.”
“Are you sure it wasn't just the vibrator?” she asked, smirking a little.
“Shouldn't I be asking you that?” he teased her in return. “I'm not going to be in competition with that thing, am I?”
Kerri couldn't resist. “Hmmm. I don't know,” she pretended to muse. It was a mistake. Before she knew it, Reno was straddling her, pinning her arms with his knees. The remote was in his hand and a diabolical grin on his face.
“You know, there's something else I always wanted to try with you,” he said. “You always get wet when I tickle you, but I wonder if I can make you come while I'm doing it.”
Kerri's eyes widened in dread. “No, Reno! Please, please, no!” she begged, knowing already that it was hopeless.
“I bet I can, yo,” he said, turning the vibrator back on high. Kerri let out a helpless moan of pleasure that turned into shrieks of laughter when he lowered his long fingers to her stomach. She was all too afraid that he was right.
