Love Does Not Play Nice (Dave2112 and CrystalLight; Part One)

[Dave2112]

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[suikoden]

The audience rises to their feet as one and bring the house down!

Damn guys, that was something else. Jade and Damien are fascinating lupine characters and clearly in touch with their animal urges. I have a feeling they both know how it's going to end before it even starts but they need that building, the verbal fencing and jabbing and feinting. It just makes the coup de grace all the sweeter.

The best thing is I know part 2 is already posted and ready to read. So guess what I am going to do now? 😀

 

[jm157]

Please excuse me for a moment while I try to slow my heartbeat back down to semi-normal! This story is a work of genius, written by two authors who amaze me with their collective talent! I kiss no butt, but simply state the facts!

I feel like I have crawled into the souls of these two characters, seeing each other through their own eyes. Suikoden mentions that Jade and Damien are lupine creatures. They both seem so predatory that I am still waiting for one or the other to begin growing fur and fangs! I guess the moon must not be full!

I guess that when two talents combine the effects are more than simply doubled. I am glad that you two had part two ready before you posted one. I don't think I could have stood the waiting. That is where I am headed now. On to part two!

 

[KrazieDog]

See my comments at the end of part 2.

 

[Marquis De Sade]

Read this one last night. Not here though. Copied and pasted it into my email Inbox so I could really pay attention without having to worry about being distracted by anything. This was everything a tickle fiction story should be. Or, well, any story should be really. Detailed. Real life characters with real life problems, issues, damages, desires, wants, needs and most importantly - thoughts honestly recorded that everyone can relate to because of all of the above. Now, I'm off to read part two.

 

[Deleted member 66627]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read it.

I know it was lengthy.

Really.

Thank you.

 

[Dave2112]

Yes, thank you to everyone who took the time. I'm always amazed by how many people say a story is long when I find so many stories, good ones, waaaay to short. There was no way this one would have fit as a short tale.

We put so much into this, and on behalf of both of us, I'd like to say thank you to those of you that got it, and appreciated it.

 

[Marquis De Sade]