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My first attempt at a comic

Tentickler1

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Well, im not sure what you guyz will think buuut heck with it, feedback iz whatz I wantz

Enjoy
 
very cute comic, 🙂 she looks a bit like nazz from ed edd n eddy 😛
 
Heh, wow. This makes me think of the flip situation of a tickle monster in Tower of Gargalesis or the Cackling Cave or something. Tickling the goo girl, mm? That's definitely a fun way to recruit new hands. And who knew they could be quite ticklish, too?

Interesting idea, and neat little comic. 🙂
 
That is an absolutely fantastic comic. I only wish that there was more. Thanks very much for giving us that.
 
For first attempt this is great. You should aim for more and see what will happen.
 
Thanks a lot everyone, I really appreciat it, Ill be doing more down the road, still think my technique could use some fine tuning lol.
 
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really good 🙂 especially for a first attempt. Personally I think the eye's should be a bit more detailed but that's all i could possibly say about it! keep going please🙂
 
Thanks a lot everyone, I really appreciat it, Ill be doing more down the road, still think my technique could use some fine tuning lol.

A comic is a good way to fine tune those skills. Liking what I see so far. Someone said the goo girl looked like Nazz? I actually think she looks more like Matt Bozon's Shantae.

As for some useful feedback, I'd say choose a stronger font for your goo girl's dialogue. It seemed a little thin and broken in spots.
 
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thanks a lot for all the feedback, there will be some changes for the next time, I noticed a lot of things I can improve on for the next one 😉

Thanks to all, Im glad you like it 😀
 
Good first attempt. If this is just your beggining work...I can not wait for when you get "better". Though I do not see how much better you can get. This looks pretty good.
 
Good first attempt. If this is just your beggining work...I can not wait for when you get "better". Though I do not see how much better you can get. This looks pretty good.

Thanks a lot, That means a lot to me, but believe me, Much to learn I still have 😉

Thanks to all for the feedback 😀

BTW FeatherDaemon: I love that Gif!! the water balloon one, lol I cant stop watching it XD
 
Dang man! 😱 You are an amazing artist! Thanks for keeping it coming!
 
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