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my first story

tickledtodeathb

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this is my first i hope you like it


Kelli was thinking about her day and remembered two gothic girls she made fun off after school and said they should try being normal for a change she fell asleep on the couch and woke up to a crashing sound she sat up and saw her cat running off thinking nothing of it she sat up and went to her room she realized she was home alone as she got into her room she took her shoes and socks off and striped down to panties and a bra laid in her bed and started to fell asleep then the crash sound woke her up she got scared and walked into the hallway all the sudden she felt a finger run down her back she turned around and saw a gothic girl standing right in her face her name was Alana she grabbed kelli’s hands kelli pushed her way but couldn’t free her hands then from behind she go pushed on the ground and all she could feel was something wrapping around her ankles and wrists they picked her up as she was screaming for help she landed on her bed squirming around she saw it was the two gothic girls from earlier that day she said what the fuck are you doing they said u want us to be normal for just a day well we aren’t normal and we just love teaching preppy little girls like yourself a lesson as Alana said that Amanda ran her fingers up kelli’s inner thy making her twitch moan and giggle at the same time Kelli tried moving but looked down and saw choker chains holding her feet together and her hands behind her back before she looked she was flipped on her stomach and felt fingers running around her sides she started laughing but her ticklers weren’t amused so they tickled her more
*Ahahahahahah stop please im sorry* still not pleased Amanda says ill get her in another place Alana said good idea kelli didn’t liked being tickled but she had never been tied up like this she felt Amanda running her fingers on the backs of her knees and jumped around a little bit * ahhhh no not my legs please kelli screamed* her ticklers faces lighted up Amanda ran her fingers down the backs of Kelli’s legs *stop please ahahahahahahahah I ca hahahahahaha nt hahahahaha take it* Amanda Stopped at Kelli’s feet and lifted them up *kelli screamed anything but the feet please not my feet* without warning Amanda started licking her feet *HAHAHAHAHAHAHA NNNOOOO HAHAHAHA MY FEEEEEEEHAHAHAHAEEETTT PLEASEE HAHAHA * Kelli was laughing and she loved the feeling of the warm tongue on her feet afer 20 minutes of this they stopped flipped her back over and noticed a wet spot on her panties *Amanda * Alana said * she loved it watch this* Alana took scissors and cut off her panties started licking her wet pussy Kelli moaned loudly and Amanda moved up and whispered in kelli’s ear * u love what where doing don’t you* kelli moved around moaning louder and louder kelli was building up and was about cum when Alana stopped and said well were all done and the both left kelli bound on her bed begging to let her cum
 
to be honest.. it was waay too quick and plain and too much like the other made up stories...

also..the BIGGEST run-on sentence I've ever seen in my life! There is absolutly no punctuation in there at all. Where does the sentence end? How do you quote someone w/ an asterisk? You need to work harder if you want your stories to be enjoyed...


good first try though. 🙂
 
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