Tickleslave07
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Good Afternoon Friends,
How are you all doing today? It's TickleSlave07 posting what I hope will be another interesting thread.
Before I tell you what this new thread intails I'd like to first say thank you for those of you who have read my
"One in a Million F/M" series your comments are touching and really mean alot to me.
Now to explain what this particular thread is? I know there are those of you who know me as a writer which why I've decided to make this thread.
You see its the serious readers I'm looking for who can help with a problem I have.
I have been for years trying to write my first book manuscript and I've even posted a few chapters here with only the lurkers stopping to gaze at it confussed.
LOL sorry just my obsearvation don't mean to offened anyone.
But seriously within the past couple of days I've gone back to re-writing my book manuscript for a second draft 'I'm now working on chapter 3.
My question is if who among you here would take the time to 1st read it and 2nd leave me a comment of what you thought about each chapter I decided to post?
Again your opions would mean alot to me in the way a fresh set of eyes see it versus mine starring at it constantly LOL
In any event please let me know thank you.
Writer/creator
of "The Case of
The En-slaved Souls"
Copy write 2004
James B.
How are you all doing today? It's TickleSlave07 posting what I hope will be another interesting thread.
Before I tell you what this new thread intails I'd like to first say thank you for those of you who have read my
"One in a Million F/M" series your comments are touching and really mean alot to me.
Now to explain what this particular thread is? I know there are those of you who know me as a writer which why I've decided to make this thread.
You see its the serious readers I'm looking for who can help with a problem I have.
I have been for years trying to write my first book manuscript and I've even posted a few chapters here with only the lurkers stopping to gaze at it confussed.
LOL sorry just my obsearvation don't mean to offened anyone.
But seriously within the past couple of days I've gone back to re-writing my book manuscript for a second draft 'I'm now working on chapter 3.
My question is if who among you here would take the time to 1st read it and 2nd leave me a comment of what you thought about each chapter I decided to post?
Again your opions would mean alot to me in the way a fresh set of eyes see it versus mine starring at it constantly LOL
In any event please let me know thank you.
Writer/creator
of "The Case of
The En-slaved Souls"
Copy write 2004
James B.
