Pay Your Gambling Debts - (M/F, MM/F, F/F)

[TiCKleMaN87]

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[Relent<]

It was a good concept, but it seemed rushed. I think if u took more time on it, used more descriptive sensory details, and took the time to properly build up and introduce your characters and scenarios, it has the capacity to be excellent. As it stands now, about a 3/5. A very good effort though, it just needs...more. y'know?

 

[TKLVR181]

An excellent job--I agree that more sensory details would definitely add to it. I liked it, personally...the end was great😉 You seemed a bit skiddish, maybe that was because it was rushed, maybe because you're not totally comfortable with all of your subject matter--don't be afraid😉

~K

 

[woodentickler]

Wow. I enjoyed this story very much. Good job, I'd use my rate-o-matic to give this story a 8/10!