Ticklish_witch
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Hey well this is a bit of a pirate story i'm sort of working on, its my first not-that-crappy tickling story, and my first story on TMF but anywho, this is only part one and no tickling takes place yet but its kind of the thing thats going to lead up to it, so yeah. Here is part one. If I get any positive feedback, I'll probably continue with the rest of the parts for this story. So, if it looks like its good, then give me some feedback and then hopefully I will post the rest!
(Before I start, I don't think its against the rules to post a story about minors if they are fictional characters and there is no adult-rated tickling, right? If it is against the rules, don't get mad at me, just let me know so I can take this away quickly!)
"DAD! DAD GET UP"! 14 year old Alex Sparrow called through the door to her fathers cabin of the ship, banging her fist on the door. "DAD! HURRY UP! WERE ALMOST IN TORTOUGA"! She called kicking the door with her foot and storming away through the thick sheet of rain pouring down onto the deck of the black pearl. She squinted up through the pouring skies and wiped some soaked raven black hair from her face. Her dark eyes, which she had inherited from her father widened as they approached another large ship. It had grey sails that were torn and ripped beyond measure. "More pirates" she thought. The crew of her fathers ship seemed to notice too, because they all stopped dead in their tracks and squinted up at the other ship too. They all at once began panicked yelling of orders to each other, running up and smacking on her fathers door, others grabbing what they could and dragging it down to the crews quarters for security. With a squeak that pierced through the roaring sounds of the storm, the door to her fathers cabin opened and their he stood, rain slapping down onto him. Captain Jack Sparrow.
So if you think I should continue (It becomes a tickling story) then please let me know, just reply to this post please and thank you! At the rate I'm going, there would be around 8 parts at the most. Thanks.
(Before I start, I don't think its against the rules to post a story about minors if they are fictional characters and there is no adult-rated tickling, right? If it is against the rules, don't get mad at me, just let me know so I can take this away quickly!)
"DAD! DAD GET UP"! 14 year old Alex Sparrow called through the door to her fathers cabin of the ship, banging her fist on the door. "DAD! HURRY UP! WERE ALMOST IN TORTOUGA"! She called kicking the door with her foot and storming away through the thick sheet of rain pouring down onto the deck of the black pearl. She squinted up through the pouring skies and wiped some soaked raven black hair from her face. Her dark eyes, which she had inherited from her father widened as they approached another large ship. It had grey sails that were torn and ripped beyond measure. "More pirates" she thought. The crew of her fathers ship seemed to notice too, because they all stopped dead in their tracks and squinted up at the other ship too. They all at once began panicked yelling of orders to each other, running up and smacking on her fathers door, others grabbing what they could and dragging it down to the crews quarters for security. With a squeak that pierced through the roaring sounds of the storm, the door to her fathers cabin opened and their he stood, rain slapping down onto him. Captain Jack Sparrow.
So if you think I should continue (It becomes a tickling story) then please let me know, just reply to this post please and thank you! At the rate I'm going, there would be around 8 parts at the most. Thanks.
Anywho, I'm working on something right now that wont b posted till its done.
