Poem 1(Love's Symphony)

[crydun]

This is one of 3 poems written for ticklish_latin. This is the first one I wrote for him. I am posting it here on the forum as you requested.

ticklishly yours,

crydun😀 😛

Love’s Symphony!

When I look into your eyes I know
I have found the Spaniard that completes my soul
When enclosed in your warm embrace
I am touched by God’s true grace.

When I see your soft, slow smile
I feel like dancing in the aisle
Your Spanish skin, kissed by the sun
Brings me comfort when the day is done.

When I close my weary eyes at night
I see you squinting in the Spanish light
My twilight is your day
Meanwhile, our hearts shall play

A symphony of love and will
When my eyes are open
I see you still
When your spirit is present, I truly know
You are the Spaniard that completes my soul.



to ticklish latin:

te amo y te extrano

 

[BigJim]

Muy bien! Crydun, you are creative in the extreme! 🙂

 

[crydun]

Si, Si!!!!Gracias!!😀

 

[BigJim]

Si, Si!!!!Gracias!!😀

De nada senorita. 🙂

 

[ticklish latin]

Beautiful!

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what can i say?

 

[BigJim]

For the next excercise, Crydun has to write it in Spanish!

 

[amk714]

Originally posted by BigJim

For the next excercise, Crydun has to write it in Spanish!

Or use the babel website's translator. 😛

Seriously, beautiful poems, crydun. You are quite talented.

 

[crydun]

Gracias! Gracias!!!

 

[amk714]

De nada, crydun! Cool, I made a woman blush. 😀

 

[ticklebunny 2]

Very Touching

This poem is so very beautifully written. You did such a magnificent job on this, it is indeed a true masterpiece!!🙂 I love the descriptive words you used to illustrate your feelings. It is so lovely it flows like a timeless sweet ballad. loved it

ticklebunny 2

 

[crydun]

awww shucks!!!!!!!!