jerry6061
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All girls over 18, this is a story about University gals. I was sick of waiting for a renfaire story, so I wrote one while sitting around doing nothing. Give me some reviews, and if there are any renfaire tickle stories other than the ones on tickle theater now it would be much appreciated if they were forwarded to this thread.
She had never been to Italy before. This was going to be an experience and a half for her. As she packed, she thought of all the good memories she would have to bring back to her friends, and others to share with friends she was about to embark with on this amazing journey.
The plane was to leave in 2 hours now, and she and her friends waited patiently next to the window watching flights landing and taking off. "Hello, and who might you be"? a strange italian voice asked from beside her. "I might ask you the same question". "Oh, how rude of me" He stammered. "My name is how would you say it in american? uhh Joe call me joe". "Oh, it's nice to meet you Joe, I'm Melissa. Can I ask you a question?" "Why yes" Joe replied. "You wouldn't happen to be going to Italy would you, I mean it's the obvious answer that you are, but I don't know anyone there and me and my friends...." Joe looked at her, up and down as if inspecting a piece of meat before throwing it onto the grill. "Why yes, but which part are you staying in". Melissa wondered why he was looking at her in the way he was, but since she knew a friend from Italy that knows his way around would be a nice thing to have, she ignored his pulsing glare. "A place called Cannelli, me and my friends are staying in a villa with an old italian family as part of a student exchange program for University.""Sounds like you have it all figured out, as I will be staying in the same area we must get together for the festival, and I will show you around, introduce you to people. You will arrive at a very exciting time." "I can only hope it's as great as I have imagined it" Melissa said as her grin became to much to bare beneath her anticipation. "I am sure you will have fun" Joe replied.
Time marched along and as if time had sped by for only those gals on their way to Italy, they seemed to walk off the plane in no time. Melissa looked at her friends Jennifer, Jackie, and Amanda who were all as excited as her. Joe was also quite close to where the girls were in the airport. "I will see you soon Melissa, and I hope that all of your hopes about Italy are true. We will meet at the festival. Don't worry about finding me, I will find you and your lovely friends. See you tomorrow." "See you" Melissa called back as she saw him walk into a crowd of people than disappear as if not being there at all. "He seemed like a nice guy" said Jackie. "He is, I Just know he is" said Melissa, slowly falling for him, her american heart beat faster.
The day was here and the Renfaire had started. Melissa and friends walked through the town and met many people, all very nice and polite. They had American flags sown onto their backpacks, noting the fact that they were tourists, which on this day was not a good idea. As Joe had promised he found them right away. "Hello lovely ladies, what shall we do first in this fair of all fairs. Wait, I have an idea. Would you like to bring photos back home to your family and friends, like a touristy type activity?" "That sounds interesting for now, lets give it a try" Joe led them through the crowds and around the many stands until finally he came to 4 sets of stocks sitting side by side. "What we use to do back in the times of my great grandfather is take women such as yourselves and strap them into these devices for punishment. It would only occur if you did something very terrible." " Are you sure were allowed to be here?" asked Amanda. "Oh yes, this is where all of the tourists come. Step up and strap yourselves in. Do you have a camera"? "Here take a few snaps with mine" Jackie said as she handed her camera off to Joe. Amanda and Melissa also handed their cameras off to Joe so he could take some pictures for them. Suddenly a few men dressed as guards came to where the stocks were. "They are assistants on the realism of your experience" Joe said as they strapped the 4 girls into the stocks raising their hands above their heads and making sure they are all strapped in tight to the stocks. The final touch was a lock placed on each stock where the feet were placed. Melissa knew something wasn't right and she saw it in Joes eyes. She knew he was up to something all along. Melissa blonde hair blew in the breeze as her 3 brunette friends all looked as concerned as she did. The guards started with Jackie, first fiddling with her new white sneakers. "Are they robbing me"? asked Jackie. No, they are simply relieving you of your futuristic shoes. They are saying that these shoes never existed in the 1700's. You know this place is very authentic". As Joe spun his yarn, Jackies new white sneakers were thrown to the ground followed by the yanking of her white socks. The other guards followed by getting Jennifer and Amanda and relieving them of their shoes and socks. Finally it was down to Melissa. Joe walked over to her and looked into her eyes. "I will take some pictures when you look nice and authentic, but first let me help you by getting these off". Joe started to unlace Melissa shoes, than pulled them off slowly. Melissa looked at her Friends who already had their big toes tied with rope to the wood which held their now bare feet in place. Looking back to her own situation, it wasn't looking good for her. The shoes were gone and the socks already half off. She knew this wasn't all that was going to happen to her friends and her, she knew what happened next was going to be a lot worse.
They were all ready, and the guards sat in a corner waiting for Joe to finish taking pictures. "You know this isn't all that happened to those girls who were tried and prosecuted. This is but the beginning." Curiosity was about to kill the cat as Melissa asked from her now dry mouth "What else happened to them?". Joe gave the guards a look and they started to approach the 4 sets of stocks. As each one came to his mark, they all pulled out long feathers and grinned. "You American girls are so naive with your MTV and your shopping malls. Have you not heard of the infamous Canelli Renfaire?". " No, why don't you tell us". "The biggest part, what the people come for is the tourist tickling. Melissa's mouth dropped as a crowd started to develop around her and her friends. The Guards started in on Jackie, and her face was instantly red. She couldn't stand the torture of the tickling. It was more than she could bare. And it was continued onto all four girls. The laughing could be heard for miles as they were each tickled for much longer than usual. American tourists were not taken kindly in the Canelli fair.
She had never been to Italy before. This was going to be an experience and a half for her. As she packed, she thought of all the good memories she would have to bring back to her friends, and others to share with friends she was about to embark with on this amazing journey.
The plane was to leave in 2 hours now, and she and her friends waited patiently next to the window watching flights landing and taking off. "Hello, and who might you be"? a strange italian voice asked from beside her. "I might ask you the same question". "Oh, how rude of me" He stammered. "My name is how would you say it in american? uhh Joe call me joe". "Oh, it's nice to meet you Joe, I'm Melissa. Can I ask you a question?" "Why yes" Joe replied. "You wouldn't happen to be going to Italy would you, I mean it's the obvious answer that you are, but I don't know anyone there and me and my friends...." Joe looked at her, up and down as if inspecting a piece of meat before throwing it onto the grill. "Why yes, but which part are you staying in". Melissa wondered why he was looking at her in the way he was, but since she knew a friend from Italy that knows his way around would be a nice thing to have, she ignored his pulsing glare. "A place called Cannelli, me and my friends are staying in a villa with an old italian family as part of a student exchange program for University.""Sounds like you have it all figured out, as I will be staying in the same area we must get together for the festival, and I will show you around, introduce you to people. You will arrive at a very exciting time." "I can only hope it's as great as I have imagined it" Melissa said as her grin became to much to bare beneath her anticipation. "I am sure you will have fun" Joe replied.
Time marched along and as if time had sped by for only those gals on their way to Italy, they seemed to walk off the plane in no time. Melissa looked at her friends Jennifer, Jackie, and Amanda who were all as excited as her. Joe was also quite close to where the girls were in the airport. "I will see you soon Melissa, and I hope that all of your hopes about Italy are true. We will meet at the festival. Don't worry about finding me, I will find you and your lovely friends. See you tomorrow." "See you" Melissa called back as she saw him walk into a crowd of people than disappear as if not being there at all. "He seemed like a nice guy" said Jackie. "He is, I Just know he is" said Melissa, slowly falling for him, her american heart beat faster.
The day was here and the Renfaire had started. Melissa and friends walked through the town and met many people, all very nice and polite. They had American flags sown onto their backpacks, noting the fact that they were tourists, which on this day was not a good idea. As Joe had promised he found them right away. "Hello lovely ladies, what shall we do first in this fair of all fairs. Wait, I have an idea. Would you like to bring photos back home to your family and friends, like a touristy type activity?" "That sounds interesting for now, lets give it a try" Joe led them through the crowds and around the many stands until finally he came to 4 sets of stocks sitting side by side. "What we use to do back in the times of my great grandfather is take women such as yourselves and strap them into these devices for punishment. It would only occur if you did something very terrible." " Are you sure were allowed to be here?" asked Amanda. "Oh yes, this is where all of the tourists come. Step up and strap yourselves in. Do you have a camera"? "Here take a few snaps with mine" Jackie said as she handed her camera off to Joe. Amanda and Melissa also handed their cameras off to Joe so he could take some pictures for them. Suddenly a few men dressed as guards came to where the stocks were. "They are assistants on the realism of your experience" Joe said as they strapped the 4 girls into the stocks raising their hands above their heads and making sure they are all strapped in tight to the stocks. The final touch was a lock placed on each stock where the feet were placed. Melissa knew something wasn't right and she saw it in Joes eyes. She knew he was up to something all along. Melissa blonde hair blew in the breeze as her 3 brunette friends all looked as concerned as she did. The guards started with Jackie, first fiddling with her new white sneakers. "Are they robbing me"? asked Jackie. No, they are simply relieving you of your futuristic shoes. They are saying that these shoes never existed in the 1700's. You know this place is very authentic". As Joe spun his yarn, Jackies new white sneakers were thrown to the ground followed by the yanking of her white socks. The other guards followed by getting Jennifer and Amanda and relieving them of their shoes and socks. Finally it was down to Melissa. Joe walked over to her and looked into her eyes. "I will take some pictures when you look nice and authentic, but first let me help you by getting these off". Joe started to unlace Melissa shoes, than pulled them off slowly. Melissa looked at her Friends who already had their big toes tied with rope to the wood which held their now bare feet in place. Looking back to her own situation, it wasn't looking good for her. The shoes were gone and the socks already half off. She knew this wasn't all that was going to happen to her friends and her, she knew what happened next was going to be a lot worse.
They were all ready, and the guards sat in a corner waiting for Joe to finish taking pictures. "You know this isn't all that happened to those girls who were tried and prosecuted. This is but the beginning." Curiosity was about to kill the cat as Melissa asked from her now dry mouth "What else happened to them?". Joe gave the guards a look and they started to approach the 4 sets of stocks. As each one came to his mark, they all pulled out long feathers and grinned. "You American girls are so naive with your MTV and your shopping malls. Have you not heard of the infamous Canelli Renfaire?". " No, why don't you tell us". "The biggest part, what the people come for is the tourist tickling. Melissa's mouth dropped as a crowd started to develop around her and her friends. The Guards started in on Jackie, and her face was instantly red. She couldn't stand the torture of the tickling. It was more than she could bare. And it was continued onto all four girls. The laughing could be heard for miles as they were each tickled for much longer than usual. American tourists were not taken kindly in the Canelli fair.
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