Second story attempt F/F

[smakaro]

I have reconsidered this story. I feel like its far too contrived, and that there are authors who just do what I do better. The more I think about the stories I wrote the more silly I find them...so I've decided to move on. There's just something wrong with what I wrote and while I got some good feed back and am appreciative I just don't feel confident in the quality of the work.

 

[Marquis De Sade]

Hey smakaro. I really enjoyed this. Thought it was very original. Refreshingly so. Will there be a follow up?

 

[smakaro]

Hey smakaro. I really enjoyed this. Thought it was very original. Refreshingly so. Will there be a follow up?

Thanks for the feedback! 🙂

There is a follow up currently posted. : ) http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?t=126238

I'm doing a mix of ?/F and F/F stories but I rely on my muse.

Best wishes!