I loved the description of the character's thoughts, & I liked the lotion! You write these stories with great attention to both actions & thoughts!

acerwydle said:Oh My GOD
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and I thought that the OTHER one was hot! 😱and I thought that the OTHER one was hot! 😱
unit5610 said:Meet me at the 99 immediately!
Excellent and very well written. This is just sizzling hot! Makes me want to run right out to Bath & Body Works to get some lotion!
Thank you, Dimple. Glad you liked it.great story sweety.....will look to see what else you have done
hyped_up said:great story...nice and short as to not lose attention yet highly and vividly detailed...excellent