Stipplewitz: Breast Tickling F/F(nudity) UPDATE

[Tomato_Dragon]

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[kahoshiden]

That is very detailed TD! Who's the girl that's doin the torture?

 

[ultimatetkster]

very nice... ahh whos kidding THIS ROCKS!!😀

 

[FF7tickler]

I must say those suggestions do indeed make a difference. I'm blown back by the awesomeness.😱

 

[Celtic_Emperor]

Upon a more scrutinous view you did add some slight coloration to the nipple...but I was suggesting more than that,and not just on the auora (sp?). They really should be more pink than white. But hey, its your character and I'm not going to argue about it.

Maybe its the white background thats throwing things off for me. Theres too much empty white space in this piture, I think.

But the other additions such as skin tone were a nice touch. I think adding blush was the second most important thing after the nipples, and if it hadn't been suggested I would have also suggested it. 🙂

It was a good picture then, and its even better now. 🙂

 

[Tomato_Dragon]

Thanks all.

Kaho: Glad you like the detail. The tickler is just someone I came up with for the pic. Thanks for the post.

Ultimate: Glad you enjoyed the pic. Thanks for the compliment.

FF7: They were very helpful suggestions. Glad you enjoyed the updates.

Celtic: I did try pink nipples, but because of her skin tone, they seemed to get lost, so that's why I stuck with white. As far as the background, I usually just put a colored geometric shape in the background, but found it didn't work for this pic. Just left it blank cause I couldn't think of anything to put back there. Thanks for the reply and compliment.

 

[Celtic_Emperor]

Yeah, I already noticed that it would be an issue to her skin color, but on the other hand you could have started with a pink and then progressively made it lighter.

Sorry, I guess I just see the nipples as an intregal part of this picture, and it is/would be a shame for the picture to fall short as far as thats concerned when its such a focus and practically prequisite.

Anyways, if you draw this type of picture again, which I'm sure you will, either on your own or by request, hopefully you can improve upon this inparticularly. Everything else is great and doesn't need to change, as meticulous as I'm being about this picture. I hope I'm not coming off as being pety to you. I'd just like to see the best possible picture from you and I'm not meaning to be condecending, but I know you are capable of more. Your originality and integrity have proven that to all of us I'm sure. I'm not questioning you, hope it doesn't come off that way, I just care about you as fellow artist and I know that you haven't begun to push your limits, much like myself...

I should take my own advice and get back on the wagon, though. I'm definitely not where I could be, producing what I know I can. I must be going through an artistic funk right now. That and its busy, busy, busy. I hate it when that happens, don't you? It throws everything off balance. LOL ^__^

Anyways, I hope you don't feel I've side-swiped you.

 

[Dave2112]

Hmmmm, something wierd happened. I posted a reply but it appears it didn't take.

Anyhoo...great pic, dude! I like the way the extreme proportions draw your eye to the action. I see where you're going with the minimilist color approach and I like it a lot.

Keep up the great work, Stipp's becomeing one of my favorites. 😎

 

[Tomato_Dragon]

Hey Celtic,
Thanks for the suggestions.

Dave,
Thanks man. Wanted to show some action by have Stipp in an awkward pose, kinda like twisting. Sounds like we are on the same wavelength as far as the color idea goes. Glad you like the pic.

 

[10 armed tkler]

*tear drops down eye*....

thank you for that little update....I like much as a breast fan myself. I hope next time she could laugh a little. That is only minor....This pic is already good as it is anyway...*sniff*...thank you once again

 

[Tomato_Dragon]

Hey no problem Tickler. I aim to please.😀