CaptainQuantum
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Okay, here's a general outline.
In a futuristic world, a country is invaded and taken over. The women are taken and made sex slaves and sold to the highest bidder. But first, their spirits must be broken so they will make good submissive slaves. If intimidation doesn't work, the next step is torture.
However the men who handle the torture have a peculiar idea. Anyone can torture someone and make them scream. But to torture her and make her laugh, adds a certain humiliation to it. Plus it leaves no marks. Being forced to laugh as if she enjoys what is being done to her, as her tormenters mock her. "do you want to be a sex slave the rest of your life? Well, look at that big grin! It looks like she likes the idea!"
Women who talk back to their captors, try to escape, or are disobedient in any way are tortured in this way. Added to this is forced orgasms. "well not only does the idea of being a sex slave for life make her smile, but it makes her cum as well!" More humiliation, more mocking.
Then comes a new prisoner. Her name is Jennifer, an exotic dancer before the invasion. 5'2", long dark hair with the body of a gymnast. Behind the sweet innocent childlike face is a strong-willed young woman with a quiet confidence. She comforts the other prisoners, gives them encouragement, acts as their big sister almost.
But most of all she gives the other prisoners courage by watching her. She refuses to be intimidated by the captors. She talks back to them, tries to escape repeatedly, refuses to be broken. She is taken into the torture rooms like all the rest, she is mocked and humiliated and forced to laugh and giggle and orgasm against her will. And each time when its over, she is taken back to the prison the women share, slumps in a corner by herself and sobs. And each time she collects herself and goes back to being big sister and caring for her fellow prisoners, and causing the captors headaches.
This prisoner must be broken and broken soon, the captors say amongst themselves. With each day the women are becoming bolder because of her. And bold women don't make good sex slaves. They decide that she will be broken once and for all, and all of the other prisoners will be there to see it. If they see us break Jennifer, they reason, they will give up all hope.
What methods of torment will they use to break the iron-willed Jennifer? Will they even be able to break her? I leave this to the storywriter(s) to decide. I'd like a lot of detail added to the rough outline I've already given, if possible. I haven't read a lot of stories, so I hope this isn't too dark and serious for a tickling story, also its the first time I've made a request like this. Just wanted to see what some of the storywriters at TMF can do with this. Thanks a lot.
In a futuristic world, a country is invaded and taken over. The women are taken and made sex slaves and sold to the highest bidder. But first, their spirits must be broken so they will make good submissive slaves. If intimidation doesn't work, the next step is torture.
However the men who handle the torture have a peculiar idea. Anyone can torture someone and make them scream. But to torture her and make her laugh, adds a certain humiliation to it. Plus it leaves no marks. Being forced to laugh as if she enjoys what is being done to her, as her tormenters mock her. "do you want to be a sex slave the rest of your life? Well, look at that big grin! It looks like she likes the idea!"
Women who talk back to their captors, try to escape, or are disobedient in any way are tortured in this way. Added to this is forced orgasms. "well not only does the idea of being a sex slave for life make her smile, but it makes her cum as well!" More humiliation, more mocking.
Then comes a new prisoner. Her name is Jennifer, an exotic dancer before the invasion. 5'2", long dark hair with the body of a gymnast. Behind the sweet innocent childlike face is a strong-willed young woman with a quiet confidence. She comforts the other prisoners, gives them encouragement, acts as their big sister almost.
But most of all she gives the other prisoners courage by watching her. She refuses to be intimidated by the captors. She talks back to them, tries to escape repeatedly, refuses to be broken. She is taken into the torture rooms like all the rest, she is mocked and humiliated and forced to laugh and giggle and orgasm against her will. And each time when its over, she is taken back to the prison the women share, slumps in a corner by herself and sobs. And each time she collects herself and goes back to being big sister and caring for her fellow prisoners, and causing the captors headaches.
This prisoner must be broken and broken soon, the captors say amongst themselves. With each day the women are becoming bolder because of her. And bold women don't make good sex slaves. They decide that she will be broken once and for all, and all of the other prisoners will be there to see it. If they see us break Jennifer, they reason, they will give up all hope.
What methods of torment will they use to break the iron-willed Jennifer? Will they even be able to break her? I leave this to the storywriter(s) to decide. I'd like a lot of detail added to the rough outline I've already given, if possible. I haven't read a lot of stories, so I hope this isn't too dark and serious for a tickling story, also its the first time I've made a request like this. Just wanted to see what some of the storywriters at TMF can do with this. Thanks a lot.
