Absolutely brilliant. Perhaps you could go for a slightly "darker" tone than the "Tickle Shoppe" series. Maybe Amanda could hold some grudge against her sister, which strongly discourages her from pressing the stop button too early.
And why did you listen to those people instead of the many praises you got here? Can't you just ignore haters? They are just JEALOUS! They are little, unimportant people with a loud mouth!Removed due to multiple people pm'ing and commenting that my writing is no good.