The misadventures of Constance

[bobhurl]

Here is a short film inspired by The Three Musketeers. It's riddled with editing errors (I hadn't fully realized the amount of work involved), but I'd be curious to know if, as it is, the film is still watchable, and if you understand the dialogue. Since I'm not a native English speaker, I'm not sure it's entirely accurate.

There are two parts :

https://www.deviantart.com/jferron/art/Ferron2-The-Misadventures-of-Constance-1st-part-1311285308
https://www.deviantart.com/jferron/art/Ferron2-The-Misadventures-of-Constance-2nd-part-1311290494

 

[newstew]

Let me just say that this is stupendous. Beyond stupendous.

 

[stockingfeetrbest]

Holy shit!

 

[JayLtickle]

Excellent work! You did great and I loved watching!

 

[hammertyme]

Wow!! That was incredible!!

 

[riff]

What editing errors? That was amazing!

 

[TMF Jeff]

Wow! What an incredible achievement!

 

[tommytikl]

This is awesome!! The animation of the goat tongues and fert is really good!

 

[TicklingToDeath]

Incredible work!!!

 

[JayLtickle]

STUPENDIOUS WORK@

 

[bobhurl]

What editing errors? That was amazing!

Well, lack of control over format (inconsistent aspect ratios, black bars appearing or disappearing unpredictably, resulting in visible jumps between shots) ; cuts often felt discontinuous ; camera movements, especially zooms, unnaturally abrupt ; character unconsistency is another major limitation ; interior spaces shifting unpredictably ; audio and overall sound texture lack uniformity ; text-to-speech truncates sentences, cutting off final words ; introducing of small but disruptive artifacts ; lighting inconsistencies, and fluctuations in image quality.

Let me just say that this is stupendous. Beyond stupendous.

Wow! What an incredible achievement!

Incredible work!!!

Excellent work! You did great and I loved watching!

Thanks a lot for all your feedback !

 

[riff]

Well, lack of control over format (inconsistent aspect ratios, black bars appearing or disappearing unpredictably, resulting in visible jumps between shots) ; cuts often felt discontinuous ; camera movements, especially zooms, unnaturally abrupt ; character unconsistency is another major limitation ; interior spaces shifting unpredictably ; audio and overall sound texture lack uniformity ; text-to-speech truncates sentences, cutting off final words ; introducing of small but disruptive artifacts ; lighting inconsistencies, and fluctuations in image quality.

Okay....Well I guess the Oscar Nominations for 'Best Fetish Clip' and 'Special Effects' are going to have to be withdrawn until you straighten that mess out! Come on Man!!! This is a great and creative piece of work and I can only imagine the time and work you put into it. And everyone who posted seems to think so too! So stop raggin on yourself! And as soon as you stop beating yourself up and fix all that stuff you think is wrong.....How bout a Sequel? I would LOVE to see that uppity bitch get hers! Really good job Bro.

Thanks a lot for all your feedback !

 

[TKLR42]

OUTSTANDING!

 

[christophe32]

Striking and magnificent work. What IA tool are you using?

 

[bobhurl]

Striking and magnificent work. What IA tool are you using?

For this video, I mainly used Kling 3.0 Omni.