tickle-me-mike
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This is from a childrens book with a fairly good tickling scene. I wrote out a transcript of what happens:
Far away in Crittervania, Mrs. Pinch was in the dungeon of Castle Dracul Duck. The vampire brides were gathered around her.
“All right, girls,” ordered Prissy. “On the count of three, we tickle her.” Sissy and Chrissy held their feathers at the ready.
“Please don’t tickle me!” wailed Mrs. Pinch. “I’m very ticklish.”
“One, two, three,” intoned Prissy. “Now, dance, Mrs. Pinch!”
“I hate to dance!” squealed Mrs. Pinch. “I told you before, I’m a terrible dancer.”
But Sissy, Prissy, and Chrissy wouldn’t listen. They began to tickle her toes.
“Ha, ha, ha!” laughed Mrs. Pinch. She jumped up and down as she tried to get away from the feathers. “Ho, ho, ho! Please stop!” she gasped. She was laughing so hard that tears ran down her cheeks.
Then, the vampire brides show their fangs, and she faints. Later though, when the main characters come to rescue her, it says that she's awake and being tickled again. Although it is made obvious that she's tickled throughout the rest of the chapter, the text doesn't really describe the tickling.
I just thought I'd post this since I haven't seen it posted before.
Far away in Crittervania, Mrs. Pinch was in the dungeon of Castle Dracul Duck. The vampire brides were gathered around her.
“All right, girls,” ordered Prissy. “On the count of three, we tickle her.” Sissy and Chrissy held their feathers at the ready.
“Please don’t tickle me!” wailed Mrs. Pinch. “I’m very ticklish.”
“One, two, three,” intoned Prissy. “Now, dance, Mrs. Pinch!”
“I hate to dance!” squealed Mrs. Pinch. “I told you before, I’m a terrible dancer.”
But Sissy, Prissy, and Chrissy wouldn’t listen. They began to tickle her toes.
“Ha, ha, ha!” laughed Mrs. Pinch. She jumped up and down as she tried to get away from the feathers. “Ho, ho, ho! Please stop!” she gasped. She was laughing so hard that tears ran down her cheeks.
Then, the vampire brides show their fangs, and she faints. Later though, when the main characters come to rescue her, it says that she's awake and being tickled again. Although it is made obvious that she's tickled throughout the rest of the chapter, the text doesn't really describe the tickling.
I just thought I'd post this since I haven't seen it posted before.
