tickling an angel

[yurokedd1]

this is my first tickle drawing,the angel is being tickle torure,on her tummy.nose,and under arms with a feather.

 

[Yukuzumo]

Yes you should practice more....as I can bearly see the picture...but you will get better with practice.

 

[SyDemon1]

It has a dreamy feel to it. The angel don't seem to be laughing...it's a very good effort though, I like the overall effect.

 

[yurokedd1]

sorry

sorry if the drawing is too small,but im still getting kicked off the internet,so i had too make the drawing smaller.

 

[sole seeker1]

Yuro, I'm impressed by your work.

I agree with Sy that the work does have a dream-like quality to it, which to me is appropriate for the subject matter.

Personally, I enjoyed the fact that the angel (a creature of light, I presume) is depicted even whiter (purer?) than the environment, while his tormentors (Satan's minions?) are drawn in dark shading. Maybe I'm reading too much into your intentions, however.

In the circumstances, I think that the angel's face and body should have been shown in clearer detail. After all, you've submitted this work for a bunch of tickling enthusiasts, and we are necessarily concerned with the lee's body.

I'd like to see more of your work. I know nothing of art, but I know what I like. Thanks for posting this effort!

 

[U.N.Owen]

There is definitely significant talent here. I have to agree that in a tickle oriented forum, there should be more detail of the actual tickling (I personally would especially like to see more laughter), but the style is very interesting and very promising. I look forward to seeing this artist develop.