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True Love: Steven King's Carrie and the angel who loved her!

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Chapter 1
Splat! The sound of my dignity shredded away. The sound that I was no longer the quiet girl who remarkably was chosen as Prom Queen. I was a laughing stock for the whole school. I felt anger rise from within me, I felt like my rage would consume. The school shook and then I heard a voice. Sue's voice. "Carrie, are you okay? Carrie?" I could hear her in my head and I knew she was outside. The door flung open and Sue came in and the doors locked behind her. My calm grew a little and the blood flew off me back into the bucket. I saw Sue in the crowd and she saw me. Then she saw Tommy. I now clean once more of the blood that had permeatted my face, body and soul, saw that Tommy had been struck by the bucket. The bucket that had splashed the happiness night of my life with red blood. Sue was scared. I wanted Sue to be happy. I walked towards Tommy and healed him. How I did so is remarkable. I went inside his head and repaired the damage, manipulate the dent of his skull and releasing the pressure on his brain. My telekenesis was growing rapidly. "Carrie, you saved him." said Sue, hugging me. I never to that point knew so much happiness as having Sue's arms around me. I hugged her back, never wishing this moment to end. "Thank you Carrie!" said Sue. "No, Sue! Thank you for giving me everything!" I replied. I just knew somehow I knew, Sue had made Tommy give me a great night and I wanted her so badly. Hugging made feel me something, something I never had before.... I felt aroused. She turned me on in ways that in my life (which admittedly aroused was not something I had ever felt before) I had never experienced. I realised then I was becoming psychic because I could hear Tommy's voice saying "I'm getting two women! I'm getting two women! Simmering Sue and Cute Carrie! I'm getting two women!" I blushed despite myself. "Are you okay, Carrie?" Sue asked me. "Better that I have ever been before. Sue.... um... maybe... you....uh.....want to ..... welll..... dance w-with me?" I return-questioned (new word we invented!). Sue smiled. "Of course, my queen!" she responded. "I-I may be queen, but you're an angel!" I quipped, rather embarassingly. I felt like a fool and regretted the words that came out of my mouth, till Sue gave me another display of her pearly whites and we danced. Again I could hear the voice of Tommy. "Boy, I'm so getting that threesome. Carrie is really into Sue! This rocks!" Now to take a step back, let's be honest. Tommy is a young American male in the modern era of 1972! If I was him, I would definitedly want the same! Especially Sue, who by now it should be clear I desire immensely. I was loving every minute of dancing with Sue despite my blushing. She held me tight and I was in heaven. During our dance I saw Nancy. Nancy who laughed at me, Nancy who Sue saw looking at the bucket, Nancy who was having a ball throwing tampons at me in the shower. Of course, in retrospect, I should have realised a dum-dum follower sheep like Nancy lacked the brains to complete basic timestables let alone setting me up like that. Of course, my rage was still on me, hence the greater confidence so up she flew into the air. She would have screamed but I locked her lips together. I left her halfway between the floor and the ceiling and slipped of her underwear, so everyone could get a good look. How's that for revenge! Of course, Sue saw none of that and I locked myself in her loving embrace. As we danced I couldn't help but wish I was Tommy Ross. To have Sue would make you divine. Since of course, she's an angel! An ANgel sent by Jesus to rescue us! Okay clearly I developed a massive crush on her, but..... it's Sue Snell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "Why are you blushing, Carrie?" asked Sue. Obvoiusly Sue is unaware of her effect on me, or so I thought then! "I think I'm telepathic! I-I can read minds!" I responded. I had rarely been so scared, what if Sue rejected me. Sue grinned. "what I'm I think, Carrie?" she said. "You are think I'm cute" and I blushed even redder "and wondering if I'm ticklish?" I answered. "Both on each count!" she revealed, gently squeezing my ribs. I giggled, apparently the no physical contact till this day made me very ticklish. "I can read T-Tommy's mind!" I expressed to her. "What's he thinking that's making you blush?" she pondered out loud. "Us both n-naked with me!" I revealed, exposed the truth to Sue. "Figures! Well that's not happening and he can forget it! Because I'm one person gal, and right now I'm dancing with you!" she told me. I never felt so happy. "I-I think I really like you, Sue!" There it was, I took the plunge. Sue giggled. "I thought so. I'm really flattered!" she thoughtfully responded. "Sue, my mother is g-going to be really mad with me, for going here. C-Can i p-perhaps.... I mean" I stuttered humilatingly. I had more power than anyone but not Sue. Sue had me in the palm of her hand. And she kissed me on the lips. The lights sparkled really bright in the Prom as her kiss electrified me. Of course, it was only luck that prevented everyone else from suffering that fate. Never in my whole life has I imagined I could feel like this like I could fly. And so wrapped in the kiss was I that I didn't realise that my mind sought to protect Sue by punishing Nancy. And so Nancy erupted with laughter as feathers danced all over her body. Of course, with her mouth stuck together the eruption of giggles satyed completely within her. Unable to move, her soles were explored, her underarms exposed her easy targets while feathers moved under her dress to explore various parts. Had I not been kissing Sue I would have noticed that the more Nancy gets tickled, the harder it would be for her bladder to hold. The feathers kissed her underarms, snuggling around the centres and licking the edges. I could not telling you how many feathers were digging and convulsing in her armpits, But I'm sure it was considerable in number. Interestingly, all eyes were not focussed on the floating girls whose arches were being dealt a frightful hammering by the feathers but on the Prom Queen making out with the Prom King's girlfriend. The feathers were dancing often around Nancy's rear region, clearly a virgin area. (Surprisingly Nancy was and still is a virgin, something I would never have believed earlier). At any rate, her private regions were apparently getting quite a workout. Apparently there were cameras monitoring the situation at the Prom in the event of hooliganism. Well safe to say, the tapes found their way to the adult industry. I saw them later. The feathers were enjoying themselves as if they had minds, dancing on her legs, spirallin on her navel, tantalissing her tummy. Suddenly the clothes of Nancy were released as if they themselves feared the tickling and greater access to a nude Nancy made her torture greater. Even after the 5 minute kiss I sampled with the hottest and sweetest girl in school, Nancy was still submitting to her nightmare. However at the end, we walked hand in hand to the stage. "Tommy, thanks for not having a problem with me dancing with Nancy!" i shyly replied. "No problem Carrie, none at all!" he responded. Similar thoughts were buzzing in his mind. "Tommy, just so we're clear, there will be no threesome!!!!" whispered Sue in Tommy's ear. "Can I watch you and Carrie getting it on them!" he requested quietly in her ear. Sue shook her head, giggling. "Carrie, do you mind if I danced with Tommy?" she questioned me. I was crushed. "sure!" I shrilly replied. She whispered in my ear. "Carrie, do you want to come to my place tonight since it's a Friday?". "More than anything. I really don't want to go home." I whispered back. She looked sad. "Don't worry, Carrie! I'll protect you!" she announced. She took Tommy's hand kissed my forehead and danced with Tommy. The crowd started to dance again. I smiled, I had never had a friend my own age before, now I did.

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Chapter 2
What to do? After How nice Tommy was been, how could I be jealous, his dnacing with his grilfriend? Still I was having a little trouble controlling my anger. This anger found it's way to Norma when Freida's hair clip flew up to tickle her left sole. The feather were even more aggressive, dancing all over the hysterical yet silent Norma. Suddenly the noise leapt a level and the dacning become a lot more vigorous. And disco. Damn disco! Disco erupted and everyone bar myself was dancing to it. But I sucked it up. After all I had no claims on Sue's affection. Miss Collins seemed to be noting my distress. "Carrie?" she asked. "Yes, Miss COllins!" I replied. "Are you okay?Please tell me!" she beseeched of me. "Oh, I'm okay, Miss Collins. M-MAybe I-I think I'm .... it's sinful to say so!" I stuttered. "Is it the fact that Tommy is dancing with Sue instead of with you!" she inquired. "N-No. I-It's that Tommy is dancing with Sue, a-and I'm not dancing w-with S-sue!" I stammered. Damn it! The last thing I thought was a homophobic mentor on my hands. "Oh! Well Carrie, I think that Tommy and Sue are a couple!" was her reaction. Well obviously! I couldn't help but get annoyed which caused the feathers to zero in on the rear end and pussy of poor Norma Watson who was getting more and more delirious. Her lips detached, however with the loud sounds of the disco she was unheard. "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHITTICKLESHAHAHAHAHAHAHHEHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHELAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHEL PAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA!" were the noises that erupted from the back of her larynx. Her laughter was only picked up my the security cameras and several decibels higher than normal speech. "I know they're a couple! I could see as she came in! I just.... I just" tears started to form in my eyes, but I stopped them with my mind. "SHe gave her happiness and tried to warn me about the bucket. She's selfless and.... out of my league!" I sighed. Miss Collins put her arms around me and I fought back the tears. "Carrie, there's nothing I repeat nothing wrong with you. I think it's wonderful that you can express yourself at last. And I don't think your out of Sue's league because she kissed you for 5 minutes on the lips. So clearly she does like you!" came the kind reply from my favourite teacher. "Thank you, Miss Collins!" I replied. In restrospect, I think Sue may have seen me a little teary cause she interrupted us. "Excuse me Miss Collins, Carrie would you like to dance with Tommy?" interrrupted the angel. My voice was a little stuck and I couldn't manage to uttera response in front of such a beauty. Sue took my hand and asked me if I wanted to dance with her. I nodded vigorously since she stole my heart and perhaps my voice. We danced disco style and then the music shifted to cheek to cheek, with I enjoyed a lot more. Then to everyone surprise, later I would realise I was subconciously choosing the music, came salsa dancing. Having Sue lead me and my leg in her arm was the most exciting event again to that point. Then she ended it by dipping and kissing me on the lips. I was in heaven and once more, Norma felt the suffering. Her underarms and feet were heavily brushed over while her **** and behind were shaking from the vigorous cleaning. As the kiss went on, I felt rain on my shoulder. So did everyone. How could it be rain and why did the rain smell? Well obviously it wasn't rain. The additional feathers twirling around her navel, belly and ribcage combined with those already in operation and new ones dancing on her back, breasts and neck causing a fragile bladder to burst free and my power gently dropped each one on everyone but Sue. Everyone looked up and there was an eruption of laughter from everyone bar a horrified Miss Collins. Even the principal could not restrain his laughter. And I know I should have been more sympathetic but it was SO FUNNY! Miss Collins approached me and asked if she could talk to me privately. I of course was none to happy to be removed from my lady love but I pried myself away from the angel (sneaking a sensual kiss and unbelievable from me a squeeze on her back jeans pockets!!!). "Carrie can you bring her down?" asked a worried Miss Collins. Trying desperatedly not to giggle, I nodded. I used my power to the fullest and she gently fell down into a corner. The feathers left her during her descent but took advantage of her gasping to dancing all over her. "WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! " she howled as her soles were tortured and her belly touched. She formed the fetal position but her underarms became the target. 'WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHA!" she roared. I tried to use my power to pull it away, but it wasn't working. "Carrie, could you remove the feather, please?" ordered Miss Collins, or it felt like one. Annoyingly they weren't bugging despite my strained effort. "Carrie, do you need some help?" asked Sue. "Yeah, I can't budge those feathers!" I reiterated. She smiled gave me a another rib tickle which got me giggling and kissed me on the lips. The feathers left Norma and she was shaking like a leaf. I enjoyed the kiss from Sue as Miss Collins went to help Norma. "Carrie, what are you thinking" Sue asked me when our kiss ceased. "My momma... She'll kill me! My powers... she'll act like I'm a witch and kill me!" I said. "Carrie! I'm sure she won't" shocked was Sue. "Yes, she will. She hit me when I got my period, I cna;t imagine how mad she is now!" I replied. "You see I... I used my powers cause I was upset at her not letting me come here! So she called them the devil's power and wanted me to pray with her! And said lots of things. She never wanted me. I'm her big sin! WHen I go home a knife is waiting for me! And I may have to stop her heart (in the book!) to live! I'm so scared cause Prom will soon be over!" I cried. "She wrapped her arms around me. "Then I will protect you like I said. Forget your psychotic mother. I'm not as much a CHristian as you, Carrie, but your mother is certainly no true Christian, to treat you like this! Stay with me, I will never let anyone harm you!" Sue declared. "You.. you would do that for me?" I responded , teary eyed. "Carrie, no-one will ever hurt you again! I promise!" She announced. That was 1976. Now it's 1999, and Sue and I have been together all that time. Tommy sadly died during a motorbike accident in college and Sue and I become a full committed couple. Sue's a teacher and I am a stockbroker. Lately Sue and I have become worried about my half-sister Rachel Lang. We have tried to warn her but she doesn't want to listen hopefully she'll deal in a healthy way (perhaps like me, her big sister?). My mother couldn't get me back since I was 18 and though she broke into the Sue's house and tried to kill me, I deflected her with my powers. I was proud I didn't kill her with them. She is still serving jail time for attempted murder and will do jail time for another 5 years. Norma went insane after the incident and remains in a mental asylum to this day and Freddy her date died in a car crash with a drunken Billy Nolan in the other car who also died. The other cheerleaders accepted me including Frieda. As for Chris Chris Hargensen, that's a story for next time.....
Love,
Carrie Snell, wife of the most beautiful angel Sue Snell!
P.S We (Heather and Anna) beg anybody to make a comment!!!!! Cause Carrie is one of our fav. films and we were wondering whether to bother including the classic character in more of our stories!
 
Well I have to say that is the most off horror interpretation of a Stephen King novel I have ever read. I also have to say I liked it. It is an interesting and clever way of twisting it. Good job and good luck.
 
that was good... i never saw carrie... not a big horror fan, but i did like this story, as well as your others, anna and heather (or heather and anna, i'm not sure who like top billing) so keep up the good work. also i read something of a futurama story and want to say that i love that idea. futurama is one of my favorite shows of all time.... although that part isnt important. well, anyhow keep up the good work, both of you.
 
I always felt poor sweet Carrie deserved a happy end.
Thank you for giving it to her.
Have you read Firestarter ?
 
yes! awesome remake to a sad story. friggin loved it, almost cried for the happy ending, lol.

i see that your evolving as writers, especially longer stories is a plus.

i'm gonna get on the band wagon and create a new charmed story, and a special willow and tara (buffy) story. also gonna do a sequel to my mia's techno-tickle dreamscape story.

can't wait to read more of your work, the idea of creating classic movie endings with tickling is just fantastic!

love your devious minds, finding such sadistic ways of torture, yall must have a hell of a time tickling each other.

keep it up,
Norman
 
"Giggle" you know it, B.N. Thanks for all the feedback and we have been thinking about a Futurama tale maybe Amy nailing Leela..... Well we're thinking about it! And Captain Bender so long as we both get mentioned everybody's happy. You're welcome Asrial, and no, but we will endeavor to do so!
Love,
Heather and Anna
 
yeah, a futurama story sounds great. my new charmed story part 1 is up.

p.s. you can just call me Norman.
 
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