true story, ff/f

[knight_tklr00]

This takes place in '74 I was 7, my sister and her friends were 10. Like every little brother I was always spying on my sister and her friends, little did I know on this day what my spying would lead to.

It was saturday morning and our mom had just left, telling me to be good and not bother my sister and her friends as she pulled out the driveway. Of course as soon as I was sure she was gone I headed right for my favorite place. Last year I had found a place up in the crawlspaces that looked directly down into my sister's room, this was a great way to find out secrets that my sister didn't want me to know about.

I reached the spot and could see my sister and her two friends, they had had a sleepover the night befor. The two girls were sitting on the floor and my sister was laying on the bed with her feet hanging over the edge, I hadn't been there long when one of the girls reached over and dragged her fingernail down my sisters foot. She let out a shreik and jerked her foot away, that's when the other girl reached out and tickled her other foot forcing another shriek from my sister. Before she could move each girl grabed and ankle and began to really tickle my sister.

She was laughing hystercally and I could see her legs jerk as they moved there fingers up and down her feet. At first my sister threatened them if they didn't stop, but after on of the girls started tickling under her toes she began begging them to stop. Of course they didn't stop, at least not right away. First they played games with her feet, seeing who could make her laugh the hardest, which foot was more ticklish and so on. Finally they did quit, even then my sister layed their for a couple of minutes just giggling.

I still couldn't believe what I had seen, the only thing I could think of was it wasn't long enough. I was concentrating so much on what I had just seen I wasn't watching where I was going and ended up knocking over a box of christmas trimmings. The noise brought my sister and her friends out of the room. She grabbed me as I was comming down the ladder, when I wouldn't tell her what I had been doing up there one of her friends told her to bring me into the room and she'd get me to talk.

After having seen what they had just did to my sister I wasn't in any hurry to go inside her room. I began to struggle and almost broke free, but the other two girls grabbed me and the three of them carried me into the room and closed the door......

 

[Muzzy Monster]

So what happened?

 

[sole seeker1]

great story - I think you should finish it.

Lots of suspense but IMO it needs a little more "color". How about describing the girls involved - including their feet.

Thanks for writing. It's been real entertaining. Really, fantastic!

 

[knight_tklr00]

great story - I think you should finish it.

Lots of suspense but IMO it needs a little more "color". How about describing the girls involved - including their feet.

Thanks for writing. It's been real entertaining. Really, fantastic![/QUOTE
I appreciate your kind words, i'll try to do better on describing the people involved on my next story.

My sister was petite with really small feet, sorry but I don't know the size. One of the things I remeber most, other than they were extremely ticklish, was the second toe was longer than the others. When tickled she was a giggler, and as with me the longer she was tickled the more ticklish she became. The other two girls weren't any bigger than my sister, one of them was into gymnastics while the other was into ballet. The gymnist was blond with the smallest feet I've ever seen and probably the most ticklish, but then again her whole body was extremely ticklish as well and she didn't giggle like my sister she laughed loud and hard when tickled. The last girl's feet was only a little ticklish, and kind of big her ticklish spot was her belly and underarms. She was a screamer at first then went right into silent laughter, I remeber the three of us tickled her so long and hard she not only peed her pants but she passed out too. Of course she got each of us back even worse.

Hope this was what you ment, again thanks for your encourgment for my story.