Bolt Girl!

[Nestor Blue]

Fun little story, I enjoyed the detailed build-up before the inevitable torture. Great reactions as well. Nice work!

 

[Viden]

Very nice, good flow to the story and detail. Great job!!

 

[kaliiii]

that's a very nice story!

 

[tennisguy21]

well written. will there be more?

 

[crazygameplaner]

That was a cool story. Cant wait for the next part.

 

[hillybilly]

Definitely liked the story. Keep up the good work!

 

[sthrntickler]

great story, I like the way you detailed it, good work

 

[elmagico11]

Excelent story chica224!!!! I really enjoy it!! I've been expected the next adventure of Bolt Girl! and other of your story too!!

 

[Jenny5309]

I really enjoyed reading this! I look forward to the next one too!

 

[featherdgrl_f/f]

awesome story indeed

 

[Lopa]

guys and gals from the chat-room are regaling the story forum with their experiences as writers

 

[MrFeather]

I liked the metaphors for what the electricity represented in regards to Bolt Girl's climax, and the struggle she had to resist.
Granted, I know a lot of stories here write out the laughing as dialogue, I think it would flow smoother without it.
Some of this work seemed to be inspired by great comic trope, which works well for it.
I liked it and look forward to the author's next work.

 

[tickleme_jack]

Chica, you are very talented! I felt as if I could see everything painted clearly and hear every sound. It is a great work! Hope to keep reading more and more from you! Keep tickling and writing!

 

[gentlefeather007]

excellently written, a masterpiece in the works!!!
sorry i thought i commented on this already, but was mistaken.
keep up the great work!!!

 

[NotAUsername]

Great story, pretty intense! A little corny on some of the details, but that doesn't really matter xD

 

[Hardy191973]

Cool story. Well written. I´m excited to read part two.

 

[TicklishRyno]

Good stuff.

Loved the whole Bolt Girl idea and the whole reasoning behind her being so ticklish and it being a plot point was great. Well done.

 

[ncage151]

what an amazing story. i love the detailed plot and character description it gave the perfect visual of the character. and last but not least the teasing. each line of teasing sent chills down my spine. WONDERFUL WONDERFUL WONDERFUL story

 

[PapaJ]

Wow!! I enjoyed very much.

 

[daftmusique]

Well this is a story I'm keeping in my personal archive. Great work!

 

[JoePTickle]

Amazing work chica224. I had so many thoughts that I just did a blog post on it rather than bury the thread here. On to part 2!!

http://www.ticklingforum.com/entry.php?5061-quot-Bolt-Girl-quot-Story-Review

 

[Burntaway822]

great story/plot, very original and can't wait to read part 2!

 

[ticklishstud7]

very hott

 

[ticklerpilot]

good so far!

 

[TheIrishCuban]

Very good story. Nice to see a writer on here that can form clear, well-written sentences. It's a nice change from seeing the same old, poorly-written crap.