This is a great story...I'm late getting to read it but wow, you really created something very different and interesting... and in the 1st person, I find that's a difficult angle to write from. Unique and excellent idea, you're nominated for a golden feather for this and I think it's very much deserved!
wowow if i hadn't decided to scroll through the posts on this thread i would never have known that the chapters have been combined..hmm wonder who that voice belongs to? is it her imagination? is it real? she can't seem to escape being tickled no matter what..fantastic installment..good luck with the nomination..you definitely have my vote..
well damn..now who does that voice belong to????? and now she can feel the tickling as well? wowow..this story just gets more interesting and interestinger..lol to quote from Alice..curious and curiouser...love it so far..you are a fantastic writer..
nooooooooooooooooooooooo it can't have been a dream damn it...lolol..crap poor thing..excellent installment...you never fail to amaze me with your creative imagination..