Marquis De Sade
1st Level Blue Feather
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I liked the dark, slightly unhinged tone but who amongst us hasn't wished we could make someone fall back in love with us when they say they no longer feel the same way but we still do? I think this story really speaks to that along with including some awesome tickling.
It was very Palahniuk too.
"People are always asking me if I know Marquis De Sade..."
"People are always asking me if I know Marquis De Sade..."
Very intelligent and amazing.
As usual.
I find it hard to believe and utterly
amazing you were able to bust out
such and incredible story in such a
short amount of time
You I inspire and frustrate with every new story you post. You inspire because I know you wrote this in under two hours and you frustrate because it is still this fucking original and brilliant even when you're at play. This was moving, emotional and hot....I could go on but it would just be repeating what everyone else has already said. As beautiful as this is from what I have read of it Sex Guns and Violence will be a bar even you won't be able to touch again.....
I loved this.
Marquis, as usual you take my breath away. I really hope you win a Golden Feather this year.
This is very diffrent its dark almost morbid but you feel the sense of longing and aching boiling to hate. I read some of your work but this piece sticks out. Not all stories are happy but this one does show that in life. It sucks.
How did I not see this the first time it was posted? This is awesome!
Bumped for being beautiful.
Just a heads-up for everyone who loved this story, Marquis is nominated for a Golden Feather! Make sure you vote!
I'm reading your works slowly, because of their intensity! I need some time to recover.
It's fun to find a happy ending, and I hoped for it; but how amazing to go where you went with this! A little scary. Okay, a lot!
You are a master craftsman, and an artist.
Where to now?