Hey Mista Dave:
Sorry for not responding sooner, real life has been smacking the crap outta me.
So far HBDP is off to s smokin' hawt start. You've already taken the story in a couple directions that were a surprise to me. And that's a really really good thing. This series is gonna be awesome. Please keep us guessing.
Page 6 and 7 were very very sexy, as was the story accompanying them. I especially like the tease talk from Misha.
I promised ya that I would include some comments about extremely sexy things I would love to see with in the wonderful fabric of this HAWT storyline so here it goes:
The coolest thing about a storyline like this, that keeps progressing, is that it allows us as reader to become more involved in the subtleties, and you as the author/artist to take your time with the action. My request would be to take it slow. As tempting as it might be to rush into the truly diabolical tickles... I think it will prove to be even hotter if you ease into them slowly and deliberately.
Some other things I might like to see - undressing. Tickle storied rarely include any sort of undressing, often because they are rushing to get to more tickles. I would LOVE to see Misha carefully undressing her "toy" and intentionally tickling every new bit of exposed flesh with expert care. It would add to the psychological edge of the entire story, and would be hotter than all get out. Plus it would make for some scorching tickle tease play.
And eventually, with a body like that, I can only hope Misha will end up on the receiving end of the tickles!
This is a magnificent series, my friend.
Thanks so much for doing this.
Our little community is so lucky to have you.
Your friend and fan,
Deet