longer, with more details
f/f said:
There was a girl by the name of Stacey whos very ticklish then 1 girl tickled her sensless becuase she likes to tickle girls.. stacey screamed and beged but no use. she got ticklked and tickle and tickled for exactly about 10 mins.. LOL anyway when the girl was done tickling her she wanted revenge. what she did is tie her up and tickle her. she did everyhting to make her stop and it didnt work
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ISNT THAT THE BEST SOTRY UVE READ f/f
While your ideas are good, you need to add more details. I would flesh it out like this:
(disclaimer: Stacey and Terry are both over 18 years old)
There was a girl by the name of Stacey who was very ticklish. Her friend Terry knew this, and planned to take advantage of it, because Terry just loved to tickle young women. She really loved it.
So one day when Stacey was just lying on her stomach on the floor, watching TV, Terry pounced on her, sitting on the small of her back. She began by digging her fingers under Stacey's arms, poking and poking with her nails. This caused Stacey to shriek and struggle, but she could not dislodge Terry.
When Stacey screamed and begged for mercy, Terry just switched to her ribs, kneading the ribs with her thumbs, as Stacey laughed and laughed, until tears began to flow down her cheeks.
Then Terry reached back and grabbed one of Stacey's ankles, pulling her leg up, so that she could scratch her pretty pink sole with her nails. She kept it up until Stacey was tickled senseless. After ten minutes, she finally got up, leaving Stacey still giggling on the floor.
"That was fun. Got you good," said Terry.
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Stacey wanted her revenge, and planned for it. Two days later, she snuck into Stacey's house, and, while she was asleep, managed to tie Terry's wrists together, and then to the headboard. Terry woke up with Stacey sitting on her legs, tying her ankles together. With Terry now helpless, she proceeded to tie her legs together at the knees also, and then tie her ankles to the footboard of the bed.
Stacey grinned at her captive, who was tied to the bed, clad only in her thong panties.
"Payback is a bitch," remarked Stacey, as she began to poke rhythmically into Terry's armpits.
Over the next hour, Terry begged and pleaded, promised to do anything, howled and shrieked, and sobbed that she was sorry, but nothing that she did could stop Stacey, who explored every inch of her luscious skin. Stacey noted all of her ticklish spots, and went back to them again and again. Her pretty feet turned out to be a very productive area, and Stacey found that rubbing them with a plastic comb was devastating. Nothing that Terry did worked, and Stacey went on and on, tickling to her heart's content.
"Revenge is sweet," said Stacey, as she gave poor Terry a rest after one hour, "but I'm not done yet. In fact, I've barely started."
The End
Details make the story more vivid. Hope that you don't mind my writing a longer version.