Out of all the pieces of mine that you bumped, Marquis, I'll be eternally thankful to you for bringing this one back up.
This is the only piece aside from the Kavean's Deliverance series I wrote that I've been the most proud of.
Yes, this piece is very short. And for many, you are used to longer, more involved pieces. If you've read any of my other work, you'll notice that occurs a lot. And the reason for it is simple; I get so excited to share with all of you who read my work, the release of not only the bottom, but the Top as well .. that it's physically HARD for me to simply continue writing the piece out. That's also why I feel there are so many I should return to and give another go at.
This story was mainly focused on the bottom. It may not appeal to many Tops who enjoy a longer tome that indepthly outlines the agony/enjoyment of the bottom. But I also feel that there is an appeal for them in the fact that although it's short, I do my best to pay strict attention to bringing the detail of the bottom's experience into the forefront. Bottom's will easily relate to this piece. Tops will get a short amusement out of the 'cause' that is happening.
I have had Part II of this piece in my writing folder for a Very. Long. Time. -- I've got a few paragraphs written and always get excited about returning to it. But with everything I've ever done .. not only here on forum .. but IRL as well .. I prefer spontaneity. I feel it makes for a fun surprise not only for myself to give, but for all of you to receive. : )
Thank you to all who have taken the time to read this .. for those that have supported me through the years .. for those that continue to support me .. & I will do my best to give to the Community only the best that I can in way of words.
Having said all that : Please spare yourself from reading my older work. It seriously sucks. SERIOUSLY. ><