Ticklish_witch
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As you all know, I tried once before to write a tickling story, and it was incredibly long, but then I just lost my enthusiasm for the idea and quit. I'm trying again now, and its a different lee, and a different ler, but it still fits into the POTC Tickling era.
I did a survey, not to long ago, called Make the Sparrow sing, thank you to everyone that replied, and gave their opinions about whether Jack Sparrow would be a lee or a ler, and the majority of people said a sexual ler, but truth is, I'm not too into sexual stories that have anything including Johnny Depp, sorry but thats just me, (there is people in undies though! *teehee*) and anyway, this story has Jack as a ler, and an original character for the lee, who, as stated in the title, is punished, with Jack Sparrows *hem hem* evil ways. Please enjoy, and feedback is MANDITORY! No, just kidding, but please give me feedback anyway.
Pirates Punishment
By Ticklish_witch
Jack Sparrow stood up on the top deck of the black pearl, arm resting on the wheel, gazing out into the beautiful open water, when suddenly Will and Gibbs were at his side, each grasping the arm of a sodden, soaked, woman, with raven hair and ripped white clothing, attempting to wrench her arms free, spitting pirate cuss words at them randomly.
"Found her stealing the silver from your private quarters, captain".
The raven haired woman was none other than one of Jacks ex-lovers, Pearl, whom he had always had the most feeling for. Enough that he had named his ship after her. She had come aboard to direct them in the correct direction of Tortuga island, as Jacks Compass was currently in Port Royal.
"I haven't stolen anything"! The woman screamed, as a few silver spoons fell out of the bottom of her dress, when she shook her head in fury.
"Very well, thank you" Jack said, taking the woman by the arm and leading her back to his quarters. He grabbed the nearest rope he saw and flung it through a hook on the cieling of the room, and pulled the two ends so that they were even. Still holding her upper arm under his own, he skillfully bonded her wrists so that she stood in the center of the room, arms tied above her head. She stared at him, her face stone cold, waiting to be beaten. He merely circled her, as though thinking up some sort of punishment.
He raised his hand as though he were going to back hand her and she flinched. "You can't hurt me, I'm a woman"!
He looked at her for a moment and stood behind her, thinking of as many ways as he could for punishment. He thought back to the day when he had found Elizabeth tied down in Barbossa's cabin.
He stepped back behind her and leaned to her and whispered in her ear, "Tell me something, Pearl, what would you do, now that your completely vulnerable, if I found out a weakness to use without hurting you"?
She stood stock still, praying that they weren't both thinking the same thing. She flashed back to days when she had been lovers with him, and the way that he would always manage to cheer her up, or weasel a kiss out of her just by getting his fingers into the right spot to make her squirm around or giggle. Now he was using it as a form of punishment? That bastard...pirate.
Before she managed to shake herself back to reality she felt his fingers ever so lightly stroke her soft hollows. The small feeling wrung a gasp from her. It didn't tickle as much as irritate, but she knew he was thinking the same thing as her, and that was what worried her. He pulled his hand back out of the sleeve of her dress and ripped the sleeve off, tossing it aside.
He stroked her hollows again, this time applying more preassure, making her giggle and bite her lip but as soon as he let go she felt the dread flood through her again.
"So that still works then, eh love"? He said, coming around to face her in the front. She scowled at him. "Let me go" she said angrily, but he merely smirked, making her even more angry.
"Sorry love, but I'm afraid I can't do that yet"
He sent his fingers spidering up her sides quickly and the unexpected tickling made her knees buckle and her arms were held up even tighter. She attempted to pull herself up but didn't have the strength, as Jack had stepped around behind her again and started tickling her hollows, more continuously, making her unable to even be angry and just crouch there giggling like a little Port Royal school girl.
As soon as he stopped she changed tactics and began pleading.
"Please, Jack, anything but that. I'm sorr-ry about the si-hilver but p-p-ple-he-he-hease not this"
He had turned a deaf ear to her begging and lightly started working his fingers down her back, making a tiny flow of constant giggling flow from her perfect lips.
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Jack climbed into bed and waited as Pearl slipped her dress off so she was only wearing her bra and panties. She slipped under the covers with him and he held her close to him. His fingers lightly began stroking random patterns on her stomach while he spoke to her, and eventually she had grabbed his hands and held them in hers, turning to face him, but he didn't seem to be tickling her on purpose, it was just the roughness of his fingers that made the sensation so strong. He kissed her passionately and his fingers wove in the tiny hairs behind her neck. She giggled against his mouth and pulled away to look into his mischevious grin.
"A little ticklish there, love"? He asked playfully, pinching her ribs.
She jumped and giggled, and he flipped her under him and sat on her legs. She squirmed and giggled before he even touched her and then he let his fingers flow up under her arms making her squirm around and giggle the way he loved so much...
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"Ja-ha-ha-ha-ck please"! Pearl pleaded. He was hardly aware he had even still been tickling her shoulders and collarbone.
He stopped and saw her taking panting breaths.
He grabbed her legs and propped the up on the desk behind her and removed her wench boots, and peeled down the soft pantyhose. Her feet were slightly pink and incredibly soft looking. His calloused fingers traced the lines on her feet and she instantly squirmed and giggled so violently that she almost fell off the desk. He grabbed her let his fingers continue drawing on the arches of her feet. She giggled and squirmed.
"Not there! Not there! Pl-hee-hee-hee-ase not there"!
He let his fingers spider up her ankles making her giggle almost flirtingly and then to the spot under her knees she shrieked and begged him to stop more.
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Pearl faced out to the sea, through the window of her bedroom.
Jack was laying on his side on her bed, looking at her lovingly.
She sat next to him and smiled a little. She wasn't looking at anything in particular so Jack ran his fingers along her waist
She jumped. "he-ey" she said, blocking her sides.
"Not putting up much of a fight" Jack said, squeezing her thigh. She giggled and tried to protect it. In moments they were wrestling each other playfully, tickling each other, and his fingers managed to sneak into the place where her stomach meets her leg. She squealed and instantly starting pleading for him not to tickle her there. She had never begged with him before, it was all playful, usually just laughter and hardly ever asking the other to stop, because it always just did when the moment was over.
However, Jack, had never been one to follow the rules. He dug his fingers into the leg joint and she bucked like mad trying to get away from him as well as she could. He finally stopped and grinned at her, she grinned back, but scowled a little.
"Found your ticklish spot" he mocked in a sing song voice. She playfully grabbed at his side. He laughed and pulled away, "Hey no fair I'm the guy, I've got a manly reputation to uphold" She laughed and let him go.
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Jack jumped back to reality again and his fingers automatically fell into place with her leg joint. She leapt off the desk and began twisting around giggling uncontrollably and begging for him to stop. Not like the begging she had done earlier. Begging like when he had first discovered that ticklish spot. It was music to his ears.
"Jack!" Pearl shrieked. "NOT THAT! ANYTHING BUT THHAHAHAHAHAT! OH GOD!! PELASE!! JACK!!! NOT THERE!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA"! She was laughing uncontrollably and tears were pouring down her face. Her face was red. "YOU KNOW HOW TICKLISH THAT IS, JACK IM GOING TO KILL YOU IM GOING TO STEAL YOUR PISTOL AND SHOOT YOU IN THE HEAD! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE NOT THAT! I WILL KILL YOU!!!"
He finally let up and looked her straight in the eye as she panted for breath and the tears finished pouring from her eyes.
"Try any bullshit again and I will make that 10 times worse. On my honor."
She panted and fell to the floor when he undid her arms. Not caring if she got up, he left his quarters and whistled to himself.
"Yo ho, yo ho, a pirates life for me"
BTW Like I said, PLEASE reply to this, I know its really short, but I didn't have much time. I may edit it sometime to make it better and longer. I attached pictures of Jack and Pearl (not together) my image of Pearl was the girl from the first CSI NY before her character got fired
I did a survey, not to long ago, called Make the Sparrow sing, thank you to everyone that replied, and gave their opinions about whether Jack Sparrow would be a lee or a ler, and the majority of people said a sexual ler, but truth is, I'm not too into sexual stories that have anything including Johnny Depp, sorry but thats just me, (there is people in undies though! *teehee*) and anyway, this story has Jack as a ler, and an original character for the lee, who, as stated in the title, is punished, with Jack Sparrows *hem hem* evil ways. Please enjoy, and feedback is MANDITORY! No, just kidding, but please give me feedback anyway.
Pirates Punishment
By Ticklish_witch
Jack Sparrow stood up on the top deck of the black pearl, arm resting on the wheel, gazing out into the beautiful open water, when suddenly Will and Gibbs were at his side, each grasping the arm of a sodden, soaked, woman, with raven hair and ripped white clothing, attempting to wrench her arms free, spitting pirate cuss words at them randomly.
"Found her stealing the silver from your private quarters, captain".
The raven haired woman was none other than one of Jacks ex-lovers, Pearl, whom he had always had the most feeling for. Enough that he had named his ship after her. She had come aboard to direct them in the correct direction of Tortuga island, as Jacks Compass was currently in Port Royal.
"I haven't stolen anything"! The woman screamed, as a few silver spoons fell out of the bottom of her dress, when she shook her head in fury.
"Very well, thank you" Jack said, taking the woman by the arm and leading her back to his quarters. He grabbed the nearest rope he saw and flung it through a hook on the cieling of the room, and pulled the two ends so that they were even. Still holding her upper arm under his own, he skillfully bonded her wrists so that she stood in the center of the room, arms tied above her head. She stared at him, her face stone cold, waiting to be beaten. He merely circled her, as though thinking up some sort of punishment.
He raised his hand as though he were going to back hand her and she flinched. "You can't hurt me, I'm a woman"!
He looked at her for a moment and stood behind her, thinking of as many ways as he could for punishment. He thought back to the day when he had found Elizabeth tied down in Barbossa's cabin.
He stepped back behind her and leaned to her and whispered in her ear, "Tell me something, Pearl, what would you do, now that your completely vulnerable, if I found out a weakness to use without hurting you"?
She stood stock still, praying that they weren't both thinking the same thing. She flashed back to days when she had been lovers with him, and the way that he would always manage to cheer her up, or weasel a kiss out of her just by getting his fingers into the right spot to make her squirm around or giggle. Now he was using it as a form of punishment? That bastard...pirate.
Before she managed to shake herself back to reality she felt his fingers ever so lightly stroke her soft hollows. The small feeling wrung a gasp from her. It didn't tickle as much as irritate, but she knew he was thinking the same thing as her, and that was what worried her. He pulled his hand back out of the sleeve of her dress and ripped the sleeve off, tossing it aside.
He stroked her hollows again, this time applying more preassure, making her giggle and bite her lip but as soon as he let go she felt the dread flood through her again.
"So that still works then, eh love"? He said, coming around to face her in the front. She scowled at him. "Let me go" she said angrily, but he merely smirked, making her even more angry.
"Sorry love, but I'm afraid I can't do that yet"
He sent his fingers spidering up her sides quickly and the unexpected tickling made her knees buckle and her arms were held up even tighter. She attempted to pull herself up but didn't have the strength, as Jack had stepped around behind her again and started tickling her hollows, more continuously, making her unable to even be angry and just crouch there giggling like a little Port Royal school girl.
As soon as he stopped she changed tactics and began pleading.
"Please, Jack, anything but that. I'm sorr-ry about the si-hilver but p-p-ple-he-he-hease not this"
He had turned a deaf ear to her begging and lightly started working his fingers down her back, making a tiny flow of constant giggling flow from her perfect lips.
********************************************************
Jack climbed into bed and waited as Pearl slipped her dress off so she was only wearing her bra and panties. She slipped under the covers with him and he held her close to him. His fingers lightly began stroking random patterns on her stomach while he spoke to her, and eventually she had grabbed his hands and held them in hers, turning to face him, but he didn't seem to be tickling her on purpose, it was just the roughness of his fingers that made the sensation so strong. He kissed her passionately and his fingers wove in the tiny hairs behind her neck. She giggled against his mouth and pulled away to look into his mischevious grin.
"A little ticklish there, love"? He asked playfully, pinching her ribs.
She jumped and giggled, and he flipped her under him and sat on her legs. She squirmed and giggled before he even touched her and then he let his fingers flow up under her arms making her squirm around and giggle the way he loved so much...
********************************************************
"Ja-ha-ha-ha-ck please"! Pearl pleaded. He was hardly aware he had even still been tickling her shoulders and collarbone.
He stopped and saw her taking panting breaths.
He grabbed her legs and propped the up on the desk behind her and removed her wench boots, and peeled down the soft pantyhose. Her feet were slightly pink and incredibly soft looking. His calloused fingers traced the lines on her feet and she instantly squirmed and giggled so violently that she almost fell off the desk. He grabbed her let his fingers continue drawing on the arches of her feet. She giggled and squirmed.
"Not there! Not there! Pl-hee-hee-hee-ase not there"!
He let his fingers spider up her ankles making her giggle almost flirtingly and then to the spot under her knees she shrieked and begged him to stop more.
********************************************************
Pearl faced out to the sea, through the window of her bedroom.
Jack was laying on his side on her bed, looking at her lovingly.
She sat next to him and smiled a little. She wasn't looking at anything in particular so Jack ran his fingers along her waist
She jumped. "he-ey" she said, blocking her sides.
"Not putting up much of a fight" Jack said, squeezing her thigh. She giggled and tried to protect it. In moments they were wrestling each other playfully, tickling each other, and his fingers managed to sneak into the place where her stomach meets her leg. She squealed and instantly starting pleading for him not to tickle her there. She had never begged with him before, it was all playful, usually just laughter and hardly ever asking the other to stop, because it always just did when the moment was over.
However, Jack, had never been one to follow the rules. He dug his fingers into the leg joint and she bucked like mad trying to get away from him as well as she could. He finally stopped and grinned at her, she grinned back, but scowled a little.
"Found your ticklish spot" he mocked in a sing song voice. She playfully grabbed at his side. He laughed and pulled away, "Hey no fair I'm the guy, I've got a manly reputation to uphold" She laughed and let him go.
********************************************************
Jack jumped back to reality again and his fingers automatically fell into place with her leg joint. She leapt off the desk and began twisting around giggling uncontrollably and begging for him to stop. Not like the begging she had done earlier. Begging like when he had first discovered that ticklish spot. It was music to his ears.
"Jack!" Pearl shrieked. "NOT THAT! ANYTHING BUT THHAHAHAHAHAT! OH GOD!! PELASE!! JACK!!! NOT THERE!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA"! She was laughing uncontrollably and tears were pouring down her face. Her face was red. "YOU KNOW HOW TICKLISH THAT IS, JACK IM GOING TO KILL YOU IM GOING TO STEAL YOUR PISTOL AND SHOOT YOU IN THE HEAD! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE NOT THAT! I WILL KILL YOU!!!"
He finally let up and looked her straight in the eye as she panted for breath and the tears finished pouring from her eyes.
"Try any bullshit again and I will make that 10 times worse. On my honor."
She panted and fell to the floor when he undid her arms. Not caring if she got up, he left his quarters and whistled to himself.
"Yo ho, yo ho, a pirates life for me"
BTW Like I said, PLEASE reply to this, I know its really short, but I didn't have much time. I may edit it sometime to make it better and longer. I attached pictures of Jack and Pearl (not together) my image of Pearl was the girl from the first CSI NY before her character got fired