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S Savvy Registered User Joined Apr 18, 2010 Messages 1 Points 0 May 7, 2010 #1 taken down Last edited: Apr 20, 2013
P PeopleWatcher 3rd Level Red Feather Joined Apr 20, 2008 Messages 1,586 Points 0 May 7, 2010 #2 This is really cute and realistic. Love it!
L Loki_Incarnate Registered User Joined Jun 12, 2008 Messages 6 Points 0 May 8, 2010 #3 A great start! I'm not usually a m/f fan, but I'd like to see more of this story =]
M Mike3355 2nd Level Red Feather Joined Oct 24, 2002 Messages 1,422 Points 0 May 8, 2010 #4 Cute Story!
M Marquis De Sade 1st Level Blue Feather Joined Nov 21, 2007 Messages 5,175 Points 0 May 8, 2010 #5 That was really delightful. Nice build up btw. Really captured that relaxed, meditative quiet intimacy when alone and when in a relationship. Nice writing.
That was really delightful. Nice build up btw. Really captured that relaxed, meditative quiet intimacy when alone and when in a relationship. Nice writing.
L Laffy Daffy TMF Regular Joined Jan 6, 2009 Messages 207 Points 0 May 9, 2010 #6 Fun story. I vote for it to continue!
T tcklshboy TMF Regular Joined Jul 31, 2001 Messages 203 Points 0 May 10, 2010 #7 resistance tickling from the first person perspective always a good read