I actually really like this story and concept! Well done! With that being said, that has me really worried. Every time I end up liking a story series, the author never ever finishes the series. I can count the # of times on one hand where I've fallen in love with a story series amd the author promised to finish it and never ended up getting around to it and the story slips through the cracks. You have a good thing going here. Hopefully part 2 is even better and we either get a part 3 or see an awesome conclusion in part 2. Either way, no one wants a cliffhanger ending. Thanks for the great work!