The Sorority Rumble! Part I: The Treatment (F/F)

[Mint Fresh]

wow, this is like book worthy material

 

[tklfeather10]

very detailed and well written story, just the sort of story i like, thanks for sharing it with us.

 

[Bends1013]

This is honestly one of the best stories I have ever read on any adult writing forum. I cannot think of the last time I cared so much about the characters and the story.

I would point out that there are inconsistencies in the story, and that some of the sentences tend to run too long, but that is nit-picking. I love the characters, I love the plot, I love the detail, I love the descriptions, I love how you made the tickle fight into a genuine story with a plot and character development as the girls were fighting. Just beautiful work!

 

[ScorpionKing]

why did the story get removed?

 

[TKMarick]

I don't know why some stories sometimes disappear...
??????