echolocation34
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You should add at least some points, to make the story more interesting.....
Gone after a day already?
I thought he could've described the ler's outfit better...
Hard to justify that now it has been taken down.
Also when somebody posts their first story maybe everybody shouldn't nitpick and criticise....
I feel "constructive criticism" is good if done with respect and care. It would make the person a better writer. But everyone should keep it in mind that we are not professional writers for the most part. We go with a story that interests us, do our best to put the thoughts to paper and share it with the members in hopes that everyone will enjoy it. Don't believe there is a "right" or "wrong" way unless of course it goes outside the site's rules for posting. Good luck to all who give it a shot and thanks for sharing!!