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I didn't edit. Seems certain words have been filtered out for some reason. Not sure what that's all about. Anyone else notice this has happened to their stories? Glad you enjoyed it.

Bravo! I loved your attention to detail. Far too often, authors have a small build-up and all too soon, the climax is 3 lines long and the story is over. In your case however, I feel like you really fleshed out the characters well, to the point where I could envision what they and even...

Sweet, sexy, and laugh out loud hilarious in just the right places to make the reader genuinely enjoy getting acquainted with especially the main character. Nice job, mate, and thanks for sharing!

My darlingest Suik, I've never been more on the edge of my seat, or bed, if anyone's keeping tabs, while reading any story, ever. You've completely entranced me and captured my full attention from Siren's beautifully and cleverly written intro, and if you can hear the jack hammer pounding of...

You will most certainly be missed, but take as much time as you need. You never know when the creative juices will start flowing again ;)

I see what you did there ;) That's for me to know and you to dot dot dot. :stirthepot:

My Darling Mantis, This was by far the most engrossing, sadistic, epic tale you've created yet! I was so tired when I began checking it out today, and I thought irrationally that since it was conveniently segmented in neat little chapters, I'd just stop after the first part and finish the rest...

You write some of the most mind blowing stuff on here, 64. Thank you for allowing us a glimpse into the sweet sadistic inner workings of your dark creative mind. ;) I'm always eager to read about the deliciously torturous fate of your next unfortunate victim.

Well written and exciting! Looking forward to reading how you'll torment your next deliciously helpless victim ;)

Very inspiring, PT. It would be great to see more of your tantalizing work!

I realize everyone has their special interests, but I find it silly for anyone to complain about minor preferences with a story so creative and captivating. You are doing an amazing job, as always. ;) Thank you so much for sharing your art with us

Beautifully written and what exquisite torture! I could visualize every torturous step of the way. :) Thank you for sharing your talent!

One of your very best yet, my friend. Thank you so much for sharing your art with us. Looking forward to a very Happy New Year of more exciting stories from your incredibly talented mind!

Your stories are extremely well written and imaginative. Though, I can't go through these bloody dungeons and raids anymore without thinking of your stories. You've given me a few ideas as well. Looking forward to reading about your next unfortunate victims.

OH you guys! So pro!! Love it! Thanks so much for taking the time to share your ridiculous talent :)

Hey Mantis! That was awesome, mate! I had only just come across this little gem yesterday, and wanted to tell you how deliciously evil it was! I love how relentless you are. A lot of my work was inspired by your style of willingness to ruthlessly torment these sexy fictional characters, and...

:clap: That was such an enjoyable read, Mantis! The characters were entirely likable and actually hilarious throughout the dialogue. You'd painted such vivid pictures of both of their personalities that I felt like I watched it happen rather than read about it... but attention to detail has...

Very well written, Mantis!! Thank you for sharing!

Sigh. What a tragedy! I can't believe I'm only finding this story now, Mantis! It's my favorite one of yours yet! :) The flow of your writing is so fluid and thoughtfully structured that it's impossible to not read every word. You nailed it. So to speak. ;)

Extraordinarily written, and I loved the ending! :D Thanks so much T.T! <3