A Feather Study (M/F) (Color)

[tk5454]

I agree with AliceM. The text is the best part! ;-)

Thanks! I do like to add text. I know sometimes it can detract, but I like to use it to set the mood. Sometimes my drawings just don't do it haha!

Awesome work! keep up. if u want an opinion: make the outlines clearer, like thicker.

Thanks! This is a great suggestion! I just tried it on the piece I'm currently sketching out, and it made a huge difference! I just wanted you to know, this was fantastic feedback. Thanks!

Hey, buddy. Kinda both really. I never would have mentioned anything if you weren't actually asking for some positive critique. And it's a small thing - but sometimes you can add more visual interest in the format you use to tell a story. Using multiple rectangles (with several square or rectangular elements inside them) can flatten out a design and make the page seem static or two-dimensional. Breaking some of those rectangles, or using some different panel designs can give your work a more stunning dynamic look. And your stuff is so good that there is no reason to make it seem static because of the layout. But I think all that will come with more time and confidence in tinkering with your work.

You've got great skills, my friend. Thanks for sharing your gifts with our small community.

B

Awesome! Thanks! I have another multi-panel idea in my near future, so let me try to apply this. You'll have to let me know if I step in the right direction, or if I go overboard haha. Your opinions really do carry great weight, everything you do is superb and I am a huge fan. Thank you very much for the help and the tips!!

 

[bballa4life60]

Incredible stuff!! You definitely have a gift! Also, I love the captions. Thank you for sharing!
Ever consider some F/M revenge..?

 

[Bananah]

Ah, love it! Always worth peeking back through someone's history!