• The TMF is sponsored by Clips4sale - By supporting them, you're supporting us.
  • >>> If you cannot get into your account email me at [email protected] <<<
    Don't forget to include your username

The TMF is sponsored by:

Clips4Sale Banner

"A question about tickling stories."

Goatmachine

Registered User
Joined
Jan 29, 2024
Messages
12
Points
3
"Hello everyone. I would like to ask you a question. When you read a story, do you prefer it to be long with a good development, or do you prefer it to be short and straightforward?"
 
I have always liked to read stories with some plot and character development before the tickling starts.
The fiction stories that I write and post here are in that format as well.
 
"I'm also in favor of creating plot and depth in characters; my stories tend to be quite long, at least 3000 words."
 
Much prefer a long story with great character development and an interesting plot!

I do feel like this line needs to be banned: "her feet were so ticklish because she got pedicures often" 🤣
 
Depends on my "mood" if you know what I mean 🤣

But if I'm in the mood to sit down and truly appreciate something in a literary sense while also enjoying the subject matter then I appreciate the long ones.
 
Stories that have better development and plot stick in my head longer. It's nice to have one that's straight to the point every once in a while, but those tend to all blur together after enough time has passed. It's the characters, setting, and plot development that gives me something to latch onto when I'm trying to remember something I read months/years ago.
 
I went to the forum to ask exactly this question. fortunately I came across your article. Then I would like to add something as someone who is curious about the answer to this question. (I think) People generally like projects that are not too long... Maybe there may be people who don't have time for that. However, I do believe in keeping a certain length and that the content should progress without boring. Also, considering that roleplaying games are also a story, the people I roleplay with can get bored before they get to the "tickle" part of the story. Maybe watching a long video and fast forwarding is an example of this.
 
I much prefer longer stories that have an actual story to them. Not just a tickle scene and a plot thrown around it to have it make sense. If any of you have read my stories, you know I have put a major emphasis on characters and their development. I want readers to get immersed in the characters' world and feel them., That way when the tickling happens, you have a "connection" to them.

I don't think I will ever write another story where it just focuses on the tickle scene and a loose plot. I know there is a very large segment of folks that like the "porn" version of a story, but right now, i am far more into the story that happens and tickling just so happens to be a part of it.
 
I went to the forum to ask exactly this question. fortunately I came across your article. Then I would like to add something as someone who is curious about the answer to this question. (I think) People generally like projects that are not too long... Maybe there may be people who don't have time for that. However, I do believe in keeping a certain length and that the content should progress without boring. Also, considering that roleplaying games are also a story, the people I roleplay with can get bored before they get to the "tickle" part of the story. Maybe watching a long video and fast forwarding is an example of this.
It's likely that you're right; advancing a plot can be complex, but to me, it seems vital for the story to be good and make sense.
 
That's a really interesting question, given that I am both a reader and writer of such stories. As a reader, I would say I like the literary approach of a good setup, a bit of world building, especially where it comes longer stories. As a writer, I do realize not everyone is like myself, and as such I'm trying to strike the middle ground. In a lot of my stories (most as of yet unreleased/unposted) I will launch right away into the (tickling action) while using the breaks in between to divulge essential world-building information, often using flash-backs as a story mechanism. It's a delicate balance when writing a fetish story... on one hand one wants to tell an intriguing tale, and yet on the other hand one needs to be aware of the reason why people are here to check the story out; the pure fetishistic enjoyment of it. A very precarious balance it is indeed. :)
 
That's a really interesting question, given that I am both a reader and writer of such stories. As a reader, I would say I like the literary approach of a good setup, a bit of world building, especially where it comes longer stories. As a writer, I do realize not everyone is like myself, and as such I'm trying to strike the middle ground. In a lot of my stories (most as of yet unreleased/unposted) I will launch right away into the (tickling action) while using the breaks in between to divulge essential world-building information, often using flash-backs as a story mechanism. It's a delicate balance when writing a fetish story... on one hand one wants to tell an intriguing tale, and yet on the other hand one needs to be aware of the reason why people are here to check the story out; the pure fetishistic enjoyment of it. A very precarious balance it is indeed. :)
I feel like you're partly right; oftentimes, readers want to get straight to the point, which makes me think that perhaps having the right mood is better for reading. But for me, it's impossible to write a story without creating a surrounding context that enriches it and gives it meaning. I think maybe the 'sensuous fetishist' is the one who enjoys higher-quality reading. At the same time, I believe that 'fetishism' in general is based on a series of details and nuances that amplify the content and frame it within what could be fetishism, distinguishing it from mere pornography.

Another really important aspect that I often find is overlooked is character creation, usually resulting in flat characters with very stereotypical anatomies (I suppose to please). But what do we really know about these characters? Why do they do what they do, etc.? Again, I believe that characters that fit better into a fetishistic context should have a certain depth and offer greater depth in their personality; otherwise, we're back to simply creating pornography.

This question is general. And what do you all think about this?
 
I feel like you're partly right; oftentimes, readers want to get straight to the point, which makes me think that perhaps having the right mood is better for reading. But for me, it's impossible to write a story without creating a surrounding context that enriches it and gives it meaning. I think maybe the 'sensuous fetishist' is the one who enjoys higher-quality reading. At the same time, I believe that 'fetishism' in general is based on a series of details and nuances that amplify the content and frame it within what could be fetishism, distinguishing it from mere pornography.

Another really important aspect that I often find is overlooked is character creation, usually resulting in flat characters with very stereotypical anatomies (I suppose to please). But what do we really know about these characters? Why do they do what they do, etc.? Again, I believe that characters that fit better into a fetishistic context should have a certain depth and offer greater depth in their personality; otherwise, we're back to simply creating pornography.

This question is general. And what do you all think about this?
I suppose this sort of ties in with the eternal erotica vs. pornography discussion, which never gets resolved, everybody seems to have their own definitions for those terms. I will say that my own writings (I'm an artist first and foremost) do tend to lean more towards the explicit and pornographic. Even at that though, where possible, I do try to develop characters, and settings, especially if they are longer stories (around the 10k words mark) or if the characters or world are recurring over the course of several stories. In such a case it's my hope that a setting can become compelling enough for a reader to look forward to the next story regardless of the fetish element. Sometimes this development occurs organically. For example, I've written a story (yet to be posted, I'm keeping it for a future issue of FantasTickler zine) titled "Aldegonde's Consort". The story started of as an experiment, an exercise in F/M themed story writing. But as I was wrapping up the story (which had grown to about 12k words) I became so fascinated by the titular Aldegonde, and the character of the (at that point nameless) protagonist, I just had to write a sequel in which these characters (and the setting -the world of Gargalesia) are explored further, and that one has since grown to a mammoth 60K+ words novel sized project (yet to be finished).

In a technical sense, tropes and stereotypes -when used properly- can be a powerful way of setting up stories quickly, when the story in question is very short in length. I remember one of the profs at filmschool pointing out how this is done really effectively in the Simpsons. An episode is really short, and for a newcomer to the series, it must be made clear in a matter of minutes what the characters are about; hence on the surface they are stereotypes. That doesn't mean of course that they should stay that way. with the characters in place, one can then start to explore their personalities further.
 
Much prefer a long story with great character development and an interesting plot!

I do feel like this line needs to be banned: "her feet were so ticklish because she got pedicures often" 🤣
To be replaced with:

”Her feet were so ticklish because she walked barefoot on concrete all day.” ;):ROFLMAO:
 
My feeling is if it's long, it had better capture my interest within the first couple of paragraphs, or I'll probably skip the rest. A well written long story is great, but I will certainly read a short one to its conclusion because it's not taking much of my time. I'm not going to be happy if I feel a long story wasted my time. So long stories are very hit or miss with me. So I'd say, if you really think you're a great writer, go long. Otherwise, keep it short.
 
I suppose this sort of ties in with the eternal erotica vs. pornography discussion, which never gets resolved, everybody seems to have their own definitions for those terms. I will say that my own writings (I'm an artist first and foremost) do tend to lean more towards the explicit and pornographic. Even at that though, where possible, I do try to develop characters, and settings, especially if they are longer stories (around the 10k words mark) or if the characters or world are recurring over the course of several stories. In such a case it's my hope that a setting can become compelling enough for a reader to look forward to the next story regardless of the fetish element. Sometimes this development occurs organically. For example, I've written a story (yet to be posted, I'm keeping it for a future issue of FantasTickler zine) titled "Aldegonde's Consort". The story started of as an experiment, an exercise in F/M themed story writing. But as I was wrapping up the story (which had grown to about 12k words) I became so fascinated by the titular Aldegonde, and the character of the (at that point nameless) protagonist, I just had to write a sequel in which these characters (and the setting -the world of Gargalesia) are explored further, and that one has since grown to a mammoth 60K+ words novel sized project (yet to be finished).

In a technical sense, tropes and stereotypes -when used properly- can be a powerful way of setting up stories quickly, when the story in question is very short in length. I remember one of the profs at filmschool pointing out how this is done really effectively in the Simpsons. An episode is really short, and for a newcomer to the series, it must be made clear in a matter of minutes what the characters are about; hence on the surface they are stereotypes. That doesn't mean of course that they should stay that way. with the characters in place, one can then start to explore their personalities further.
Actually, my stories tend to veer towards the explicit, even to the most bizarre, you could say. And perhaps I expressed myself poorly regarding stereotypes; my native language is Spanish, and I struggle with English quite a bit. (That's why I don't publish any of my stories, as they are written in Spanish.) ChatGPT could help me with translations at some point, but I feel that this technology still lacks some refinement, and the translations would lose a lot of literary quality. Anyway, returning to the use of stereotypes, I consider it correct, since with just a little help we can easily identify the characters without having to delve deeper into them (you explained it better than I did). What I meant to say is that personally, I like to take characters towards the grotesque and push them beyond aesthetic and ethical limits. Another blonde model and university student with ticklish feet? Oh, what a surprise. It doesn't quite convince me. Did you get your revenge on your sister-in-law with ticklish feet again? Truly magical... I hope the irony is understood. That's what I was referring to in terms of using characters. Of course, characters can be used like that; everyone is free to do so. I write about a character named Rose; she's really short and almost completely flat-chested, which causes her complexes. She's forty-four years old, recently divorced, and has two children. After so many years of marriage, Rose has decided that it's time to experiment, not knowing that there's a whole world of leeches out there ready to suck her dry. I'm not sure if I'm really explaining myself clearly. In any case, it's a pleasure to share viewpoints and learn from others.
 
My feeling is if it's long, it had better capture my interest within the first couple of paragraphs, or I'll probably skip the rest. A well written long story is great, but I will certainly read a short one to its conclusion because it's not taking much of my time. I'm not going to be happy if I feel a long story wasted my time. So long stories are very hit or miss with me. So I'd say, if you really think you're a great writer, go long. Otherwise, keep it short.
I understand what you're saying. It's not always easy to capture the attention of readers.
 
Does the walking on concrete thing work?
I honestly don’t know. I have an oversized sense of humor and was just trying to be funny.

What ever makes feet more ticklish and produces better story telling, weather it be pedicures or concrete, I’m all for it! :)
 
I am really happy to see folks loving an actual story to go with the tickling. I believe that developed characters would only enhance the tickling scenes. Because if you can get people to care about the characters themselves, the more intense the tickling scenes will be. Us writers have a much greater challenge than video producers. We have to create the "image" of tickling through words. That's what makes it fun.

I also love world building. To create a world that someone can get wrapped up into and enjoy the story and the characters. I know it is more likely folks will like a single scene, with a loose plot to set it all up. I truly value those fans and writers that prefer the "novel" version of stories. Because if anyone follows my "Depupty's Universe" series, you are reading a novel for sure. Heck, the series "The Deputy & The Outlaw: Retribution" series is 21 parts long, has well over 250,000 words combined, about 750+ pages on Microsoft Word. It is a novel. And I love those fans who read the whole thing! I am currently about to start the next phase, so I hope folks still enjoy it.

I look forward to other "world building" stories, that include tickling scenes. We need more of them!
 
Door 44 Productions
What's New

4/27/2024
Visit Clips4Sale for the webs largest clip store! Get details by clicking the C4S banners
Tickle Experiment
Door 44
NEST 2024
Register here
The world's largest online clip store
Live Camgirls!
Live Camgirls
Streaming Videos
Pic of the Week
Pic of the Week
Congratulations to
*** brad1701 ***
The winner of our weekly Trivia, held every Sunday night at 11PM EST in our Chat Room
Back
Top