Batgirl Captured (part 2)

[Umojar]

Batgirl Captured Comic (part 2)

Hello again folks. It's been a crazy few weeks for me, so I haven't been able to do much, especially tickling art. I was having problems left and right. It's been very stressful. Anyway, everything seems relatively back to normal now, so I picked up where I left off.

Anyhow, I've been working on this comic for soooo long, it's really getting to be a pain. It got so long I split it into 3 parts. This is part 2. Now I know that a few of you probably don't even remember much of the 1st part by now, so I'll take it upon myself to shamelessly bump it back up to refresh your memory(no need to thank me 😎 ) But that's enough for the intro, here it is... Batgirl and Catwoman. Let me know what ya think.

Edit: I fixed the pics also to make them a little easier on the eyes.

 

[Senshi1]

Now that is good. 😀 I mean really good. The characters are spot-on, the artwork is great, and the story is engaging. I can't wait for the next installment!

 

[Kalamos]

:happy:

 

[Umojar]

Thanks folks. The 3rd part is in progress(I swear it is).

 

[Featherdemon]

Really great art work! The characters are great and the story is amazing! more more!

 

[Lunar]

Awww, come on, Umojar. You're really good, please make a part 3

 

[Darth Vegeta]

wow

Excellent. Just so you know i'm a huuuuuuge fan of this series. Can't wait for more!

 

[BigNorm]

Excellent. Just so you know i'm a huuuuuuge fan of this series. Can't wait for more!

i too am a big fan, looks just like the comics. excellent work, Umojar.

 

[Umojar]

Thanks y'all. I already started on it. Hopefully you won't have to wait as long as you did for part 2.

 

[Darth Vegeta]

wow

Can't wait. Really can't. To be honest i'd given up on a sequel. I'm overjoyed i was wrong.

 

[Umojar]

Yeah, I was planning on finishing the whole thing before posting, but once it got to be longer than 4 pages, I decided to break it up so that at least I can post some of it in the meantime while I finish.

 

[Kenjisan]

You're terrible! How am I supposed to offer constructive criticism if you keep doing such an excellent job? Grade A work!

 

[Umojar]

Hehe, well what can I say? I'm just that damn good. 😎

But seriously, I can already spot plenty of anatomy mistakes in there, I just didn't care enough to fix them. I know there's something about women that I don't have down just yet. Hopefully someone can figure it out.

 

[Federkitzler]

Oh man, YOU TEASER!! 😀 Can't wait for part 3. I hope, catwoman wore these boots for a looong time 😉

 

[Kenjisan]

Hehe, well what can I say? I'm just that damn good. 😎

But seriously, I can already spot plenty of anatomy mistakes in there, I just didn't care enough to fix them. I know there's something about women that I don't have down just yet. Hopefully someone can figure it out.

Whats important, particularly with comics, is that they look good at a glance. If you closely look at many professional comics, alot of the anatomy is incorrect with the exception of big panels where there is lots of focus.

 

[F.L. Atlanta 10]

nice comic.

 

[Umojar]

Whats important, particularly with comics, is that they look good at a glance. If you closely look at many professional comics, alot of the anatomy is incorrect with the exception of big panels where there is lots of focus.

That is definitely true. Especially with superhero comics I notice it a lot.

@Federkitzler- Um, I don't think I'll go that into detail.

@F.L. Atlanta- Thanks much.

 

[BigNorm]

i guess if you need to work on an area for improvement, it would have to be the feet. not saying they're bad, just the only area it seems could use any improvement.

 

[Kalamos]

i guess if you need to work on an area for improvement, it would have to be the feet.

Allow me to disagree on that.
I love them that way.
I dig the style.

 

[Umojar]

Hm... well for what it's worth, I drew catwoman's feet somewhat differently, just because... well... she's a different person. I don't know what it is people don't like about the feet! T-T Someone else mentioned the same thing on ATF. Maybe it's the lack of detail... In any case, since you weren't the 1st person to mention it, it's something I'll consider. Maybe I'll make some change, even if it is really subtle.

 

[Kalamos]

Someone else mentioned the same thing on ATF.

People have *way* too much time to spare.
You draw a great comic for free, and yet somebody manages to find something to complain about.
I cannot really fathom the way humans think.

😉

 

[Umojar]

Well, to be fair, I asked for any suggestions that people may have because people hold back for fear of offending someone. Plus, feedback is half the reason why I post my work at all. The other half is to get to show off. XD

 

[Kalamos]

Well, to be fair, I asked for any suggestions...

I can understand that.
I cannot understand what's wrong with the feet.
I actually like the style.

 

[Kenjisan]

I can understand that.
I cannot understand what's wrong with the feet.
I actually like the style.

I agree. I think they look good. You're B+W art work appears to intentionally be light on details while being well drawn. I think such extra details wouldn't fit with the look. Best saved for a color image IMO.

 

[Kalamos]

You're B+W art work appears to intentionally be light on details while being well drawn. I think such extra details wouldn't fit with the look. Best saved for a color image IMO.

Exactly my point.
You risk overdoing and making them look too wrinkly, while they are supposed to be soft and smooth.
I think they could accept just a line under the pads, but that's about it.