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C.A.B. Presents: Al Shaytan - Chapter Two (w/ Cartoon & Coming Attractions)

Well done!


Thank you, Sir. You are partially to blame for my behavior. It is obvious that you are my inspiration as is evident in the inverse namesake.

If I may, I would like to recount (as best I am able, a hedonistic lifestyle in the 80s and 90s make it fuzzy) when I first saw the great BAC's work. Sometime in the 80s I was on my way to meet a client deep in the industrial back-roads of Miami, I stopped into a workingman's, take-no-crap coffee shop/newsstand and perused the the stacks of adult magazines that were unabashedly right out in the open. If memory serves, I was looking at an ashcan special supplement of Leg Show (or some such quasi-fetish mag) and while flipping through… there was the consummate BAC illustration… the two upturned soles in stocks with feathers and implements in a cup between. I froze. In all my years I never thought anyone could capture the fantasies that had occupied my entire life. An epiphany for sure. Unfortunately, the article did not elaborate on the artist… but the name stuck, BAC. And as the internet came to be, I would come to find your works, hastily and badly scanned by fans and posted on usenet. You are a community ground-breaker, Sir; a legend in your own time. And I pay homage to your skills. Thank you.
 
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Thank you very much for the great ART! *bows*

Thank you, Bo. An honor to earn the respect of such a great artist and collegue as yourself.

Fantastic stuff my friend. :thumbsup: Love it. :yourock:
You rock, Kurch! Thank you for lending your awesome artwork and helping to make the chipmunk random chaos more random and chaotic. And, for being a kind and gentle soul, a good friend.

Loved it. And love your new banner. 🙂 Oh! And "Ceen" looks fucking awesome! And hot. Can't wait.

Those beautiful lipszzz UGH! They launch a thousand sighs. I am deeply honored for your beauty on loan. You are gracious model with feisty moxy, Ceen is partly inspired by you, in the best tradition of strong, intelligent, and beautiful women; Lara Croft, LeeLoo (5th element), Clarice Starling, and TankGirl. With your help, Ceen will be a hit for sure.

As always, EXCELLENT!!! :thumbsup: 😀
I humbly prostrate to the TMFs own Queen of Hearts; I am your servant, my Lady. Thank you for always being there for me.
 
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Great job! :thumbsup:

Loved the added cartoon and coming attractions. Ceen promises to be a summer blockbuster.

Jim
MTJpub.com

Thanks, Jim. With your support, I hope to achieve something special.

LMAO! I love those chipmunks. The only good animal comic strip left, IMHO, besides "Pearls Before Swine" (since MyCage was canceled months ago)

And all I can say about the Al Shayton strip is.: Damn, DC or Marvel or some other comic company needs to hire you to do their art.

He-Man, the chipmunks demanded I relay a message to you, "YOR FUCKIN' "A" RIGHT, BOYO!" End quote.

Seriously, thank you for your patronage. I remember going to Madison Avenue in the 70's to meet the great Stan Lee at Marvel Comics. I think I was 10, had no appointment, and lugged all my little drawings in a cheap briefcase I had saved up for, purchased from a 5 & Dime. Amazingly, Mr. Lee met with me and graciously flipped throgh every single page of my crap, commenting here and there, he introduced me to all the (now legendary) artists and writers in the "bullpen", loaded me up with two arm fulls of comic books, and told me to "go, and be excellent!" And even though my path in life did not include being a comic book illustrator, I never forgot that. Funny, the things that shape us.

I hope everyone gets to see this. This is what greatness looks like. You truly have this down to an art in the purest sense of the world.

In my 20 or so years in the community I can say that very, very few can come close to the quality you have here. Story, art, plot and dialogue are superb.

I take my sombrero off to you sir.

Rob

I am in receipt of your Awesome Sombrero Tip, and am honored. With the clarion call of your bully-pulpit, Sir, I am sure to reap the benefits of your fine showmanship.
 
Just incredible, as always. Exceptionally well done!
Thanks, Obs. Always appreciate encouragement from a cornerstone of the community.

Delightful and ambitious work.

We couldn't be more different in our approaches. But I always regard your work with great interest.

Respect,

Deet

Respect back at 'cha, Deets. You do it your way, and I'll do it my way, and we'll all have one big fat fetishistical love fest together... uh... or somethin' like that.

"...I will make you warm and tickle you until you die"

ABSOLUTELY AWESOME (particularly alshaytan 21 and the "nipple" close-up on 22). Extraordinary detail; the renderings and text are equally sterling. The full nudity and resultant exploration of tickling, as genuine torture, combine for a breathtaking tableau. Thanks so much for circumventing the recreational stuff and applying a precedent to the fetish as a decidedly erotic torment. Quite impassioned with your work; this particular installment--undiluted tickling sans constraint--is classic.

Lily
Lily, I deeply appreciative of your erudite acumen. I like to think I fill a niche of the TK fetish, while not for everyone, there are those whose blood runs hot with darker erotic fantasy. While I appreciate almost all aspects and sub-fetishes of TK, I must be true to myself first; I subscribe to a belief that if I do what turns me on and I am passionate about, it shows through as legitimate and not life-less pandering. Thank you for taking the time to offer an intelligent analysis.

Amazing...SO worth the wait!!! Man am I glad I discovered this forum in time to relish your amazing work 🙂 THANK you!!!!
Aragorn, you have been a long time supporter and I am grateful. Thank you.

A masterwork, as always. Your generosity at giving this away for free is quite commendable.
I like to think that I offer the "Everlasting Gobstoppers" of art to the community, "For those with very little pocket money." Thank you, Sir.

Wow, Great stuff!:numberone::judges:
Tommy! Thnanx Dooood!
 
You really spoilt us this time! Another brilliant chipmunk installment with a fine collab with sporelord, and is it me or have you referred to an old Star Wars tickle pic with that same premise? Also, Al Shaytan is looking like a cast-iron classic in the tickling art community as well!

Oh, and I do apologise for being quiet lately. I have a full-time job now, and I'm also more involved in DeviantArt as well.
 
I never normally look at the art section too much but that was absolutely bloody fantastic. I need to go and have a stiff drink and a cold shower now!
 
You really spoilt us this time! Another brilliant chipmunk installment with a fine collab with sporelord, and is it me or have you referred to an old Star Wars tickle pic with that same premise? Also, Al Shaytan is looking like a cast-iron classic in the tickling art community as well!

Oh, and I do apologise for being quiet lately. I have a full-time job now, and I'm also more involved in DeviantArt as well.

Hey Chimp buddy, a full time job is great news! And congrats on your DA work! I'm sure everyone agrees that we will take any Chimp we can get! Congrats again on 10 great years!
 
OUTSTANDING!

You were excellent - now you are a MASTER of sequential art. I think your art is as good as anyone in any genre!!! CONGRADULATIONS!!! - W
 
FTR, I quite made an institution already (LOL) or kink out of giving long feedback to tons of stuff around here, but I’ll do it again for this masterpiece. Please bear with my language errors.

Al Shaytan is really a complex material and it is not for the faint at heart. The intensity of this chapter is close to watching a film with convincing actions. The pacing of the story is fast and the choice of words conveys presence and impact. I don’t know, but as much as this is really, REALLY despicable and cruel in theme, as it is so daring and may offend the young folk of the community, but the quality just soars with unsurpassed mastery... imagine...only for a freebie art.

Many scenes had been well “physicalized” for the viewers to perceive real torment, an example of which is the barefoot women walking the desert. It is very much felt from here. The extreme contrast can be seen in each line, like the rough hands, shriveled and photo-aged skin of men as opposed to the delicate demeanor of stricken women. The eyes of each character have unveiled unspoken sub-plot on its own. I appreciate every detail and the well-researched authenticity presented here.

My favorite HOT scenes, or will it make me shy to admit… (he-he-cough) Won’t tell…. I have quite a very non-violent life that I want wretched fantasies of relentless and ultimate doom 🙂devil2🙂. The more evil the better – like the very title of this comic – “al shaytan” <<< to some who have not done, do google it and know it is indeed evil. 😉

I am especially captivated by the feathers teasing the nipples – that panel. My favorite details are the many “decay” in the lighting, still life ornamentation, glitters, fire, evening, panorama, multiplicity, and the transparencies… and lastly, the composition and anatomy.

Only in fantasy for this comic… These are just drawings right? It’s damn HOT. I have to stop now.
 
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You were excellent - now you are a MASTER of sequential art. I think your art is as good as anyone in any genre!!! CONGRADULATIONS!!! - W

That is a very fine compliment. But I only wish to relentlessly persue the mastery of my craft. Thank you Watching!


FTR, I quite made an institution already (LOL) or kink out of giving long feedback to tons of stuff around here, but I’ll do it again for this masterpiece. Please bear with my language errors.

Al Shaytan is really a complex material and it is not for the faint at heart. The intensity of this chapter is close to watching a film with convincing actions. The pacing of the story is fast and the choice of words conveys presence and impact. I don’t know, but as much as this is really, REALLY despicable and cruel in theme, as it is so daring and may offend the young folk of the community, but the quality just soars with unsurpassed mastery... imagine...only for a freebie art.

Many scenes had been well “physicalized” for the viewers to perceive real torment, an example of which is the barefoot women walking the desert. It is very much felt from here. The extreme contrast can be seen in each line, like the rough hands, shriveled and photo-aged skin of men as opposed to the delicate demeanor of stricken women. The eyes of each character have unveiled unspoken sub-plot on its own. I appreciate every detail and the well-researched authenticity presented here.

My favorite HOT scenes, or will it make me shy to admit… (he-he-cough) Won’t tell…. I have quite a very non-violent life that I want wretched fantasies of relentless and ultimate doom 🙂devil2🙂. The more evil the better – like the very title of this comic – “al shaytan” <<< to some who have not done, do google it and know it is indeed evil. 😉

I am especially captivated by the feathers teasing the nipples – that panel. My favorite details are the many “decay” in the lighting, still life ornamentation, glitters, fire, evening, panorama, multiplicity, and the transparencies… and lastly, the composition and anatomy.

Only in fantasy for this comic… These are just drawings right? It’s damn HOT. I have to stop now.

Wow. Thank you for another in-depth analysis, Bo. I predict you have excited all the boys and girls and your PM count will go up 400%

Holy smokes!!! Can't wait to see the next part!
work work work work work - it never ends does it? LOL! Thanks FT, I'm a big fan!
 
Wow. Thank you for another in-depth analysis, Bo. I predict you have excited all the boys and girls and your PM count will go up 400%

Eeek. "In-depth analysis"... Your art execution is more than educational actually.

What do you assume about my PM box? Ugh. Two things about their faith and *my* fate: the TMF men are evidently real gentlemen, they do send me courteous PM, otherwise, some think I'm a mister and gracefully call me "Sir"! :shock:
 
Mr. Bohemiane? *cof! ... LOL!

Regardless, we all know the male populous of the TMF are reserved, respectful, and tactful beyond reproach. *cof!
 
Mr. Bohemiane? *cof! ... LOL!

Regardless, we all know the male populous of the TMF are reserved, respectful, and tactful beyond reproach. *cof!

Haha (cough)! Lustwitzercise, actually. I take it this way: this place is where people can test drive some flexibility in skirting their growling lust, say, when they download the media or so, then tame the screaming slap of good manners in selected ‘circumstances’ like reaching my PM. Self-composure is not negotiable. LOL.

-o0o-

Anyway.

Back to topic. Like I expounded in my “in-depth analysis,” this comic has many artistic angles to see. If one can bypass the fwap elements and go straight to see just at least the art techniques applied here and the flow of contents… What rage bring it forth collectively? Nevermind… I take as is where is, because there are too many rooms in each panel to see through, left for the readers to think. These are not simply clean lineart spruced by lazy layers of coloring, but more. Perhaps, one can sieve either mayhem or organized contemplation in the mind of its creator and the blazing struggle before its completion – in between doubt, madness, confidence and guts.

Just the humble opinion of an artist. Cheers! :beer:
 
/GIEF chapter 3 god damnit!! 😛
 
/GIEF chapter 3 god damnit!! 😛

"We tried making LuteFisk, but all the alligators moved away an now we have a family of Norwegians living under the house."
 
Uh, I don't mean to sound ungrateful, but i was wondering when the next installment is, this is becoming most anticipated!!
 
Uh, I don't mean to sound ungrateful, but i was wondering when the next installment is, this is becoming most anticipated!!

...not at all... I'm shooting for this summer, along with the first chapter of Ceen, and...

... a few surprises along the way.

Thanks for asking.
 
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