fate tickles m/f

[tickledevil]

Before the story some important points

1.- my English is bad so if you find any mistakes write then
2.- the story is based on the anime fate/stay night
3.- I use some images in the story, ignore what they are really saying, I don’t know Japanese, I used the images because they are very good
4.- I use a lot the word "sempai", it is a polite way of saying "superior"
5.- normal words = events
6.-color words = dialogue
7.- bold words = thoughts
8.- I hope you like it


Prologue

There is a war between magicians were they kill each other for a powerful tool, they can surrender if they want but they lose their right to win that tool. This war is unknown for normal people. The participants have a symbol in their hand but only a magician can see it, the characters of the story (Sakura and shirou) are magicians and they know about this war



Characters

Sakura matou

She is a kind and shy person, she always tries to be polite with everyone, when disappointed or disappoints some dear to her she gets really sad, she rarely gets angry and even if she does she tries not to show it. She had been in love with shirou for some time.

Shirou emiya

He is a little serious and always tries to help others, he always tries not to hurt anyone but if he now that there is no other way he will do it (but as less as possible). He has been a close friend of sakura for some time but he began to lover her

Story


Sakura is walking to the room where shirou is

Sakura- I wonder when shirou- sempai is planning to start

Sakura- Shirou-sempai I brought you a glass of water

Shirou- thank you sakura you shouldn’t have bothered

Sakura- is ok. Sempai diner is almost ready

Shirou- thank you. sakura you are too kind, I feel like I’m taking advantage of you

Sakura-Is all right sempai, I like to help you. Well I think I’m going to continue with that

Sakura starts leaving the room

Shirou-ah? What’s that?

Shirou- (shocked) is it a magic symbol …it can’t be

Shirou grabs sakura’s hand

Sakura- what is shirou- sempai doing, is he going to hug me?

Shirou- (angry) sakura what is that symbol, are you in the war… I never thought that of you…tell me have you killed someone….do you want to kill me

Sakura become really sad and hugs shirou and starts crying

Sakura-(sad) I…I’m sorry sempai, I’m really sorry… I never wanted to be a participant but my family pushed me...sempai I would never hurt anyone….

Shirou hugs her

Shirou- (kindly) please forgive me sakura, I didn’t mean what I said, please don’t cry I’m no longer mad at you, I know that it is not your fault and that you are a good person, I’m sorry

Sakura seems better

Shirou-(kindly) sakura you have to abandon the war

Sakura- yes I know that, but I can’t do it, my family…I don’t know what they could do

Shirou- I’m sorry sakura but if you don’t want to abandon I’ll have to make you do it

Sakura- (a little scared) sempai are you going to torture me?

Shirou- (surprised) of course no sakura. Torture is the lowest; I would never do that to anyone

Sakura- (curious) then what are you going to do to me

Shirou- I have something in mind

Sakura- ?

Shirou- tell me sakura….you are ticklish, aren’t you?

Sakura- (shy expression) ah? Sempai why are you asking that?. You won’t be thinking in..?

Sakura sees shirou’s psychopath/perverted smile

Shirou- relax sakura this wont hurt at all

Shirou starts tickling sakura (ribs and armpits)

Sakura makes little effort to stop shirou

Sakura- (giggle) please sempai don’t do that (giggle)

Shirou- so, do you surrender sakura?

Sakura-(giggle) I can’t (giggle)

Shirou- I won’t stop until you surrender

Sakura- (giggle) sempai that’s so mean (giggle)

Shirou- I wonder… how long are you going to resist

Sakura- (giggle) ah? (giggle)

Shirou- but don’t worry I have no plans for tonight

Sakura- (laugh) please sempai (laugh) stop it (laugh)

Shirou- you know what you have to do if you want me to stop

Sakura- (laugh) I’m serious sempai (laugh) I can’t do that (laugh)

Shirou continue tickling sakura, after a while he stops to let sakura rest a little

Shirou- tell me, have you made up your mind?

Shirou looks at sakura’s eyes but she looks to other way

Shirou- I guess no

Sakura- (shy) I’m sorry sempai

Shirou- is ok…well I guess I’ll continue with your lower body

Shirou grabs sakura’s feet and slowly trace a line in her soles

Sakura-(laugh) sempai don’t (laugh) please (laugh) stop it(laugh)

Shirou- are your legs ticklish to?

Sakura- (laugh) ah? (laugh) sempai I (laugh) I surrender (laugh)

Shirou-do you surrender sakura

Sakura- (laugh) yess (laugh)

Shirou stops tickling her

Shirou-(a little worried) sakura you are crying

Sakura- (happy) I’m ok sempai, it’s because I laughed a lot

Shirou- sakura you are so sweet

Sakura-….

They continue hugging for some time, nobody said or did anything at that moment

Sakura- sempai tomorrow it’s my turn to choose what are going to do

Shirou- do you have any ideas

Sakura- yes, is the middle of the war and I have captured the magician of the emiya (shirou’s last name) family, and…. I going to make him tell me where his spell book is

Shirou- (a little worried) … “am” sakura you do know that I don’t have a spell book

Sakura- (sweet smile) that’s the idea sempai

Shirou- (a little worried) sakura is ok if you want to tickle me but I don’t like the idea of being a prisoner

Sakura smiles in a sweet way

Sakura- (Kindly) please sempai

Shirou- I’m… not sure….

Sakura- (Kindly) only this time….ok

Shirou- (sighs) …. ok sakura

Shirou- she’s to cute to say no

 

[Falconwing]

lovely... Not too bad.

 

[Alex_West]

Well I do like the visual representation that follows along. Being the first piece of work I've viewed from you, I'll have to give you a thumbs up for it.