First Post - TICKLING DUNGEON x3 (M/F) - criticism and advice requested

[sporelord]

Hello all!
So this is my first attempt at tickling art. I hope it's alright! I'm still learning the software (they're my first attempts at photoshop, too) so I think you can see my efforts improving (at least I hope they're improving!) as the pictures go on, from one to three. So sorry for the inconsistant style...
I'm a bit nervous about posting, seeing as there are so many talented artists here, but hopefully you can let me know what needs improving and what needs work. I love this forum so I think it's only fair if I at least tried to give somethign back, right?
I've been working on a few more tickling pictures, so maybe I'll post them in due course if you guys like these.
So let me know!
And thanks.

 

[C.A.B.]

I like these very much. You are to be encouraged.

 

[summerdaez]

I agree with C.A.B. Fine job, and I hope you contribute more!!!

 

[grippedchimp]

Very very very nice work! That's quite a fine debut!

 

[milagros317]

Very nice images, especially the third one. 😀

Welcome to the TMF and congratulations on making your first post. 😀 This is a wonderful place, have fun here.

 

[Synful Pryde]

Nicely done 🙂 Thank you for sharing them with us. I like the continuity from picture to picture!

 

[Bohemianne]

Nice concepts and I really like it you did it chiaroscuro style. It gives drama to the scene.

 

[LD_Tickler]

I like it a lot. Second image especially.

 

[Michael2002]

Aw...I just love how cute and shy she looks as she walks toward her inevitable torment. The way she blushes as she strips off her clothes is delicious. And of course, seeing her go from shy and scared in the first two panels to uncontrollable laughter in the last one makes the trio of pictures undeniably satisfying. 😀

My only regret is that she didn't strip all the way (or at least go topless like the ticklee in the first picture). But it doesn't matter. Knowing that it's left to the imagination what happens next makes this worth the viewing. Great job! 🙂

 

[rajee]

Great artwork.

 

[Tidas]

Really awesome art! I'd love to see more of your work!

 

[tklphile1]

Great collection of starting pics. I like the first one the most.

 

[Orbanjo]

Really pleasant pictures, spore! Thanks for posting them =)

 

[sporelord]

Hey everyone.
Wow, thank you all so much for your feedback. I'm thrilled you like them, and, to be honest, a bit starstruck as well. I've been coming to the forum on and off for some years now, enough to know a lot of you and your own artwork. So to hear that you like what I've done is just great!

C.A.B.: Thanks, man. Talk about praise from Caesar! I'm a massive fan of your 'rAnSoM' series, which really inspired me to do something dark for this series.

Bohemianne: I'm ashamed to say I had to look up chiaroscuro. Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

Michael2002: Wow, I think I enjoyed your descriptions of the pictures more than the pictures themselves. Your wonderful story-writing skills from the stories board really shows!

Grippedchimp and Rajee: More praise from Caesar! Wow. Thanks so much you two. Needless to say, I'm a big fan.

Milagros317: Thanks for the welcome. I hope to become more active on the forum in the future and really start to take part...

Orbanjo, tklphile, Tidas, LD, summerdaez and Pryde: Thanks so much guys, I can see this is a really welcoming place and I'll definitely be posting more artwork in the future.

Phew, I think that's everyone for now. Thanks again for taking the time to have a look at my pictures. I actually got quite attached to this character while I was making these, and, naturally, I've got a few more ideas about what tickly tricks her captors might play on her in the deep dark dungeon, hehe... So, I dunno, would you guys like to see more of this particular series in addition to the other pics I've been working on? I've thought about trying my hand at tickling fiction, too. Might try and write something at some stage, maybe make it about these if people wanted to see more.
let me know.

Oh, and here are some of the original inked drawings, for anyone who might be interested.

 

[JN322]

I really enjoy this style, please continue. 🙂

 

[seanwoj]

Good work. You should make a comic out of this.

 

[LD_Tickler]

I like the character, too. If you were thinking of doing more in this series, you should.

 

[tickle_prince]

these pictures are outstanding ^^ i don't know what you were so worried about! 😛 theirs always room for improvement, but i am loving the style and your colouring ^^ an excellent debute indeed! keep up your hard work 😀

 

[MTJpub]

You sure know how to make an entrance

Nice illustration work, a first rate debut! Very atmospheric and expressive.

Perhaps you can enhance the presentation with some flavor text that can expand upon the story.

I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Jim
MTJpub.com

 

[sporelord]

I just have to say, thank you everyone. I am genuinely chuffed at the welcome. It looks like I'll have to revisit this series in the futre alright, and take all your great advice on board.

 

[Tickle_Emperor]

This is absolutely amazing! I've been waiting for someone to create something Hostel inspired, amazing pics! You can really see the terror in their eyes... And that rack in pic 1 looks incredible! Me wants...

Do keep it up,
- The Emperor

 

[icetickler]

These are great pics.. you should certainly do some more!

 

[Aragorn]

Very very nice! Thanks for sharing the pictures, can't wait for more 🙂

 

[bballa4life60]

Please....PLEASE continue! :-D

Oh, and if you want a little advice on an easy way to add effect to your drawings, add captions! 🙂

 

[goddess_nemesis]

Very nice. 😀