OMG!!! Oh Marquis . Well done!!! Fantastically crafted...down to the sentence structure...the physical structure. This story is incredibly hot! The detail was amazing, I completely felt like I was in the room, I could feel his paranoia, his pleasure and emotion...his desire to remind her in the most fabulous of ways...*sigh*...
Another fantastic piece from you...I would expect nothing less, but this was far better than any expectation