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[Persephone]

thanks....yeah, in general im a sad person, lol. especially with a song like that, as personal as it is, and the particular subject.....nobody wants to be able to talk about their father like that. unfortunately im able to, and frankly it sucks. but i make the most of it. i dream of the day when his evil is no longer in this world, and i can lay claim to the tons of things my mother once owned, that iv been kept from by his greed.

You wish your father was dead?

 

[VMANDUDE]

You wish your father was dead?

if you listened to the song, you'd understand why. hes been an abusive, selfish, heartless prick his whole life, and my whole life. he blames ME for my mothers death.....she died of a heart attack....how the eff is that my fault? according to him, it is. thats the kind of crap i deal with. so yes, frankly, the day he dies and burns in his rightful place in hell, will be a glorious day for planet earth, as a particularly evil soul will be removed from it.

 

[Persephone]

I just think it's a bit much to wish your father dead especially because without him you wouldn't even have life. I just asked a question, nothing more.

 

[Jagermeistered]

If you want my honest, honest opinion... It sounds like a sixth rate Eminem song. The lyrics and sound doesn't coalesce together. I would pick up something more of a modern rock song, using the same three chords; from the last song that has preached the same complaints and anger. Once again just my opinion.

 

[ShiningIce]

Practice makes perfect. I'm not sure if you're intending to fully enter the music world. If so you have breathe it, eat it, and shit it. Practice makes perfect.