femtummyticklee
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hi, i wanted to write part of a story and hopefully if people like it they can add the next part~~~ no matter how long or short or what kind of contribution, it would be nice if we could write a story together~~~ :wub
maybe you could write a part from the tickler's perspective or something~~~ it's an experiment :lol
one idea is "zombie ticklers"~~~ :scared the zombies act like zombies in movies but are constantly laughing and when they trap a victim they pin them down and tickle them until they lose their mind and become another zombie tickler! i'll try to start that one another time~~~ 😉
i loved a story i read on here about a tickle war~~~:cool but i cannot find it now and don't know who to credit for this HUGE inspiration~~~:wub now i wanna write my own story how i imagine i would be a spy in a "tickle war" in the future of a fictional world~~~ i thought of some ideas like hidden messages in people's laughter which the interrogators must extract, or messages written in invisible ink on ticklish spots which must be dusted and examined~~~:rolleyes
i was sent undercover to pass a message onto one of our spies. i was not given the identity of the spy, instead i must impersonate a high ranking officer and say "the last laugh will be ours" in a certain meeting where the spy will be among the board members, upon hearing this, the spy will have understood the message. i was also given some coordinates which i must write on the underneath of the table at the meeting.
it was a tense meeting, i nervously awaited the opportunity to deliver the line, after which i could evactuate. it was a room with a long table, 12 of us sat around it wearing bulky suit-like officer uniforms. i was worried that i may be found out as could not help but glance around trying to identify who my message is for. i was nervous, sweating and squirming, wondering what would happen to me if they found out. i was abruptly brought to attention when the commander sat opposite asked for my report. i tried to fix my eyes on his and speak clearly, reciting what was on the clipboard in front. at the end of the recital, i used the opportunity to deliver the message. suddenly his face dropped and everyone stopped still for a moment. the room froze in deadly silence.
the 2 people at either side of me suddenly grabbed my arms, a person stood behind me cupped their hand over my mouth. my eyes were bulging, i was in complete shock and terror. the commander opposite spoke, "we've been expecting this. your contact was discovered and has told us everything she knows. i can assure you that you will also tell us everything you know."
he gave a hand gesture and the others cleared the table surface. 2 more people grabbed my legs and lifted me onto the table and held down spread eagle and handgagged me. he instructed them to take off my shoes and socks and then unbuttoned the bottom of my shirt to reveal my trembling belly. tears streamed from my eyes while my whimpers were muffled by a strong hand clasped over my mouth. suddenly, a man in a white coat entered and said, "commander, wait, the doctor would like to give a demonstration to his pupils. may we use this one?"
"very well" said the commander. He looked me in the eye and said "unfortunately for you my dear, you are to become the doctor's specimen. you know who the doctor is, don't you"
i realised who they were talking about and my eyes widened in terror. the commander was dipped a rag in chloroform and stood over me. he kissed me on the forehead and the hand was removed from my mouth. I only had time to say "no, please, ill talk!" before my pleas were smothered by the rag. the last thing i saw were a room full of faces looking down at me as i lost conciousness~~~
haha hope someone adds to this but if not, ill continue alone :huh
thank you!!! :wub
maybe you could write a part from the tickler's perspective or something~~~ it's an experiment :lol
one idea is "zombie ticklers"~~~ :scared the zombies act like zombies in movies but are constantly laughing and when they trap a victim they pin them down and tickle them until they lose their mind and become another zombie tickler! i'll try to start that one another time~~~ 😉
i loved a story i read on here about a tickle war~~~:cool but i cannot find it now and don't know who to credit for this HUGE inspiration~~~:wub now i wanna write my own story how i imagine i would be a spy in a "tickle war" in the future of a fictional world~~~ i thought of some ideas like hidden messages in people's laughter which the interrogators must extract, or messages written in invisible ink on ticklish spots which must be dusted and examined~~~:rolleyes
i was sent undercover to pass a message onto one of our spies. i was not given the identity of the spy, instead i must impersonate a high ranking officer and say "the last laugh will be ours" in a certain meeting where the spy will be among the board members, upon hearing this, the spy will have understood the message. i was also given some coordinates which i must write on the underneath of the table at the meeting.
it was a tense meeting, i nervously awaited the opportunity to deliver the line, after which i could evactuate. it was a room with a long table, 12 of us sat around it wearing bulky suit-like officer uniforms. i was worried that i may be found out as could not help but glance around trying to identify who my message is for. i was nervous, sweating and squirming, wondering what would happen to me if they found out. i was abruptly brought to attention when the commander sat opposite asked for my report. i tried to fix my eyes on his and speak clearly, reciting what was on the clipboard in front. at the end of the recital, i used the opportunity to deliver the message. suddenly his face dropped and everyone stopped still for a moment. the room froze in deadly silence.
the 2 people at either side of me suddenly grabbed my arms, a person stood behind me cupped their hand over my mouth. my eyes were bulging, i was in complete shock and terror. the commander opposite spoke, "we've been expecting this. your contact was discovered and has told us everything she knows. i can assure you that you will also tell us everything you know."
he gave a hand gesture and the others cleared the table surface. 2 more people grabbed my legs and lifted me onto the table and held down spread eagle and handgagged me. he instructed them to take off my shoes and socks and then unbuttoned the bottom of my shirt to reveal my trembling belly. tears streamed from my eyes while my whimpers were muffled by a strong hand clasped over my mouth. suddenly, a man in a white coat entered and said, "commander, wait, the doctor would like to give a demonstration to his pupils. may we use this one?"
"very well" said the commander. He looked me in the eye and said "unfortunately for you my dear, you are to become the doctor's specimen. you know who the doctor is, don't you"
i realised who they were talking about and my eyes widened in terror. the commander was dipped a rag in chloroform and stood over me. he kissed me on the forehead and the hand was removed from my mouth. I only had time to say "no, please, ill talk!" before my pleas were smothered by the rag. the last thing i saw were a room full of faces looking down at me as i lost conciousness~~~
haha hope someone adds to this but if not, ill continue alone :huh
thank you!!! :wub
