Isobel's alien duct dilemma: alien probes/F (nudity, bare boobs)

[detritus1]

Hi all, happy 2012

Isobel has got herself into a bit of bother again

An investigative mission from a far away planet has landed on Earth and the inhabitants of the ship are friendly and pleasant, and have been welcomed by Earth's leaders

Nonetheless, they want to just find out for sure if there is anything sneaky going on, so they have dispatched a few select reconnaissance agents to have a look around the ships

Isobel was to sneak in through the service ducts and eavesdrop and generally find out anything that might be interesting

She stripped down to her undies and oiled herself up (standard operating procedure for duct sneaking) and started to slither and squirm her way amongst the pipes and wiring, this wasn't hard for her, being so lithe and flexible

But then it went a bit wrong, she got herself stuck in one of the main junction areas where everything gets a bit tight and crowded... that was ok, she was fairly sure she could get herself through if she just concentrated

That was when the automatic diagnostic system detected that there was something blocking the duct and sent a number of probes to find out what it was - the probes started to run their feelers over Isobel to find out what she was and how to get her out of the way... that was when her concentration dissolved... the feelers were desperately ticklish... it wasn't so much that they were touching her skin (although that was ticklish enough) but they are using minute electronic signals... sending them into Isobel like sonar and these are stimulating her nervous system in a most unbearably ticklish way... it's almost as if the probes are deliberately sending tickles under Isobel's skin and deep into her muscles

After quite long time of the probes investigating poor Isobel all over they still couldn't determine what she was so an engineer was sent to see what the problem was

He really isn't quite sure what to make of this silly looking life form making such a strange fuss in his duct system

As far as he can tell, based on the scant research material on humans, she seems to be happy enough, judging by her facial expression.. he seems to remember that is called smiling or something.. so he will probably just close the doors and leave her to it, what ever it is she's doing... it's nearly lunchtime anyway

 

[Low_Roads]

One can hardly fault the extraterrestrial techie for any error in judgement… Isobel does seem extremely pleased with the situation! Do her emotions belie appearance? Most lees would envy her this sort of amusing accident! Very neat scenario, both graphic and written! The story's cute, not so involved as to wear out its welcome, and the image is a perfect compliment (though it functions equally well without detailed explanation)! The cartoony approach makes for lively viewing… the alien's blasé consternation is quite approachable and relatable (if he fails to evince the ribald enthusiasm the rest of us might feel, it's understandable; he's on the job, after all), while Isobel's hopeless, helpless hilarity amidst the rubbery tubing and flashily teasing pyrotechnics is either a caution against unwarranted suspicion or a serendipitous reward, depending on one's outlook. Our druthers, obviously, will tend toward the latter, despite the lady's personal concern! Well… she knew the job was dangerous when she took it!

 

[10 armed tkler]

dude dietrus your stories that go with your pictures make them all the more enjoyable to look at. And yes Happy New years and Thank you for the pic/story

 

[reeperolaughter]

wow awesome, thats a gr8 one, always enjoy ur work and the stories u come up with

 

[sexygamedesigns1]

Definitely agree with the accompanying text bringing the icing to the cake here.

Great work.

R

 

[detritus1]

One can hardly fault the extraterrestrial techie for any error in judgement… Isobel does seem extremely pleased with the situation! Do her emotions belie appearance? Most lees would envy her this sort of amusing accident! Very neat scenario, both graphic and written! The story's cute, not so involved as to wear out its welcome, and the image is a perfect compliment (though it functions equally well without detailed explanation)! The cartoony approach makes for lively viewing… the alien's blasé consternation is quite approachable and relatable (if he fails to evince the ribald enthusiasm the rest of us might feel, it's understandable; he's on the job, after all), while Isobel's hopeless, helpless hilarity amidst the rubbery tubing and flashily teasing pyrotechnics is either a caution against unwarranted suspicion or a serendipitous reward, depending on one's outlook. Our druthers, obviously, will tend toward the latter, despite the lady's personal concern! Well… she knew the job was dangerous when she took it!

thanks again LBH

dude dietrus your stories that go with your pictures make them all the more enjoyable to look at. And yes Happy New years and Thank you for the pic/story

you're very kind thanks, glad you like them both

wow awesome, thats a gr8 one, always enjoy ur work and the stories u come up with

thanks, glad you liked the picture and the story

Definitely agree with the accompanying text bringing the icing to the cake here.

Great work.

R

thank for the kind words about the pic and the story


thanks all for the kind feedback about the mini-stories, it means a lot

 

[Lily Haze]

Cute and as delectable as sugar cookies. Very nice (sexy) work!

Lily Haze

 

[detritus1]

Cute and as delectable as sugar cookies. Very nice (sexy) work!

Lily Haze

thank you lily, i'm glad you liked her predicament

 

[TressSlave]

Alien looks like inhabitant of Omicron Persiae 8 on Futurama 😉

 

[detritus1]

Alien looks like inhabitant of Omicron Persiae 8 on Futurama 😉

funny you should say that, that is indeed where the visitors are from

well spotted 🙂

 

[Tom Tickle]

Duct-based predicaments are ideal for tickle scenarios (I have one in mind that I would like to use in the right comic).

You have a confident, eloquent and lucid turn of phrase, and it's a pleasure to read these vignettes. The art is how I like it; a cartoon style with important flourishes of detail (the feelers around the nipples and the mechanisms of the duct, as well as the hysterical expression).

My friend... Isobel and yourself are a bit of a birthday present!