M Mechafeather87 TMF Poster Joined Jul 1, 2015 Messages 106 Points 18 Jul 2, 2015 #1 Erased Last edited: Mar 2, 2023
F FinnTickler TMF Novice Joined May 20, 2012 Messages 53 Points 8 Apr 30, 2016 #3 A good story. The storyline is long but not too long. You might want to add quotations though to make it easier to read.
A good story. The storyline is long but not too long. You might want to add quotations though to make it easier to read.