Machiavelle In Color..BETTER COLOR

[Journia]

What the title says....Tell me what you think of it, and be as brutal or as kind as you wish. I wish to perfect my art.

The second picture is a picture of a bunch of robotic antibodies for a new story. Keep nagging me about it and the story will present itself.

 

[Low_Roads]

I've commented on these pictures before, so I'll restrict my remarks to the new color jobs: quite lush with well-chosen secondaries (my favorite pallet type) and nicely varied density. The wine-dark backdrop for the second offering is rich enough to drink! I'm also quite partial to teal and burgandy, likewise well prepresented. What can I say? You're playing to my favorites!

 

[Relent<]

I've made this critique a few time s now, but line variance it important for conveying realism and artistic structure. But the picture itself is fairly good; the expressions could be better but we can't all be tomato Dragon. On the plus side, at least you have a pretty good grasp on feet ^_^ (get it? Grasp on Feet?)

 

[Journia]

Thank you littlebighead and thank you relent, heh, Grasp On Feet.....heh.....

 

[Master Chief]

Bumping....I have to say, you are getting better from when I last saw your stuff. Much improvement.