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My first F/F story

TKLVR181

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Hi guys. This is my first f/f story EVER, and I’m mega nervous about posting it. For starters, special thanks to Feathers for giving me permission to do this and for pre reading it for me; thanks for pre reading also goes to ’03. You guys rock, thanks so much for your positive feedback.

One warning; this story contains some…adultish f/f tendencies. There’s a fine line between embarrassingly wimpy and just plain dirty that erotic stories of this type fit in, and I promise I did my best to walk that line.

As always, feedback welcome, wanted, and I feed off of it, so please reply😉

-Karen

IN HELL


I woke up with my arms tied over my head, standing alone in a dark room. It took me a few moments for my eyes to get adjusted to my surroundings.


At first, of course, I was scared out of my mind. Who in the world would kidnap me and take me someplace like this, tie me up…and leave me? That just made no sense. The only people who had ever kidnapped me before had only tickling in mind…I never woke up alone. And here I was, with my arms chained to a steel ring in the ceiling, spread above me, with my coat gone, wearing only my shorts and spaghetti strap tee, completely alone. The aloneness scared me more than being captured did.

I began to take deep breaths and test my bonds. They were metal, but with rounded edges, so they didn’t cut into my skin. Who would take the time to make sure I’m comfortable? I thought. This was my first clue.

My second clue came from the sounds around me. There were sounds of laughter, and I could tell they were coming from the same building as I was in. Further off, from outside the building, I could hear screams.

I knew where I was; I was in Hell.

This alone would scare most people; I knew I was safe, or at least as far as Hell’s standards were concerned. I was in the realm of a friend of mine, Feathers the Daemon. Most people think ‘evil’ when they hear the term Daemon, but there is a big difference between a Daemon and a demon. Demons are the angels that left Heaven with Lucifer to become Satan and his followers; Daemons are their children and grandchildren. Demons have a direct tie and allegiance to Lucifer, where as Daemons simply have a place in Hell as their birthright. Feathers is one such child of Demons. Far from evil, he’s one of my closest friends and most trusted switch buddies. Feathers is also known as The Tickle Daemon.

That doesn’t mean I wasn’t nervous. On the contrary, the fact that he wasn’t in the room led me to believe that he was probably in another room getting something---and that made me very nervous. (I was in Hell people, cut me some slack here! 😛)

I didn’t have to wait long; not thirty seconds later the door opened, revealing Feathers. He came in with a feline girl, a Kat. Kats are Feathers’ handmaids, and live-in lees, with human-shaped bodies, close fur covering their entire bodies, and long hair. This particular specimen had the signature short-cropped fur, with long red hair and green eyes.

“Hello there, Karen.” Feathers said, evil grin upon his face. “Are you comfortable?” I smirked at him and nodded.

“My dear Kat, I have brought you a gift from the upper-world for being such a good pet for longer than any others. Happy birthday.” With that, he gave her a peck on the cheek, gave me a “you’re ok with this” look (to which I simply nodded slightly) and stepped out of the room. I’ll say one thing for Feathers; even when he’s being evil he’s considerate.

She was wearing a pink tank top that only came slightly past her breasts and shorts, which was odd because Kats are generally either totally nude or wearing only a small black thong.

She noticed my puzzled look and smiled. “Master doesn’t want me to offend your…strictly human sense of propriety.”

I chuckled. “That’s not all Master thought out.” I said matter-of-factly.

She grinned, obviously not buying it. “What else, hmm my new toy?” She began to tease my stomach with her long, humanlike nails.

I giggled, fighting the reaction she was looking for. “Hehehe he leheft me my lock picks!” With that, I pulled my arms out of the cuffs (that I had just unlocked), flipped her over my head, and locked her in.

Grinning, I circled her predatorily. “I do believe Feathers set you up, honey.” I teased, running my own fingers down her sides and stomach.

She, unlike I, was unable to hold her laughter in. “Mee-OWWhHAHAHAHHAHAHAH! HOHOW COHOULD HE DO THIHS TO ME?” She wailed.

“Oh, don’t worry dear, Feathers knows I would never hurt anyone, leastwise someone else’s lees—and didn’t I hear him say it was your birthday? I suppose he only wanted to give you a birthday surprise!” I chuckled, pausing. “Ooh, how cute…she’s wearing a shirt for me…it’s a shame that this is going to have to go.”

Her eyes got as big as the saucers she eats out if. “N-no please, don’t take off my shirt! You don’t know how t-ticklish I am!”

I just walked around behind her, waited a few seconds, and then reached my armed around to her stomach and dug in.

“ROOOOWWWRRHEHEHAHHHAHAH!” she squealed. “NOHOHO! MIHISTRESS, PLEHEHEHEHEASE! I’M TOHOHOO TIHHICKLISH!” I was a bit surprised to hear her call me ‘mistress’ this early in the game; I figured it might take some reprogramming of Feathers’ training. I had apparently underestimated him. Again.

I, of course, just dug in faster. “Oooh, does my ickle Kitten have a tickly belly? Hmm? Ickle tickle tickle!” I wiggled my nails under her shirt.

She bucked as best she could in her bonds with my arms around her waist. “NOHOHT THEHEHEHRE OH MIHISTRESS, PLEHEEHHEASE!”

I giggled. “Oooh, is my ickle Kitten more ticklish under her clothes? Hmm? Well then, I think maybe I’m just going to have to take off this silly shirt of yours! Is that ok with you, honey?” I asked, knowing she would be unable to lie to me.

She looked at the floor, obviously embarrassed. “Y-yes ma’am.”

I slowly, slowly took hold of the bottom of her shirt and pulled it over her head, revealing everything from an inch under the bellybutton up.
“Mmm, how cute, a bare upper body for me to play with.” I teased, pulling out two feathers.

Her eyes got big as saucers. “M-M-Mistress…wh-what are you going to do with those…”

I chuckled, walking around behind her again. “Just wondering if these would be effective on your ickle furry skin…” I began twirling one around her stomach.

“Yes it ihihHIHIS! HEHEHEHEHAHHAHAHAHA!” she wailed, wriggling from side to side.

“My my my, we have ourselves quite the ticklish little ‘lee, don’t we. I do believe she may be the most ticklish ‘lil Kat of them all! Kootchy kootchy kooo!”

If she were human she would have been blushing like mad—instead, her tail was curling up around her leg, which is the Kat’s equivalent.

I couldn’t help but notice. Giggling, I whispered in her ear; “Aww, is my poor ickle ‘lee getting a tad embarrassed, hm? What’s wrong, enjoying yourself? Oh my, I think she is…”

Sure enough her humanesque nipples were standing straight up on end. Unable to resist, I applied one feather to each of them.

The response was electric. “MEE-OOOOWERMMEEEEHHEHHHEHEHEHEENOOOOOOOOOOOT MY NIHIHPPLEEHEHS MEIHIHISTRESS PLEEHEHEHASEHEEHHEEHEHEHEEHEEEEMMMMMMMM…”

I chuckled in her ear; I know for a fact that this is infuriating for the ‘lee. “Why? Aren’t you enjoying your tickles, my little lee? Hmm? Was that a moan I heard? Answer mistress…”

She went into silent laughter at this, so I paused. After regaining her breath she nodded, tail curling tighter. “Y-yes ma’am. I love it.”

“Love what?” I walked around to face her.

She looked down at the floor. “W-when you tickle me. E-e-especially my n-nipples.”

I grinned. “Goood girl. For answering me honestly you will be rewarded.”

“H-how, if it’s my place to ask, ma’am?” She stammered, looking quite nervous.

I chuckled. “Well, seeing as how you love the nipple teasing so much…” I trailed off, glancing at her face.

It was somewhere between horror and anticipation; I ran a finger over each nipple slowly. I saw her shudder, tail unwrapping slowly.

Thaaat’s it…just enjoy it…” I said slowly. I saw her close her eyes, relaxing in her bonds.

One of the perks of being such a good friend of Feathers’ is that I am well versed in Kat physiology. And one thing I know from this is the fact that Kats have certain places that are extra sensitive to just about any tool you could apply. Nipples are one of these “hot zones” that not only tickles, but also turns them on.

”Tsk tsk, you’re not laughing, Kitten. I need to fix that!” With that, I bent over and began licking her left nipple slowly.

“MmmmMEEEEOOOOOWRRRRRRHEHEHEHEHEAHHAHANOOOOOOOOHEHEHHEHEMIHIHSTRESS! DOHOHN’T UHUSE YOHOHOOUR TOHOHUNGE!!!” she begged.

“Mmm ooh yes I will, because you taste…sooo good Kitten, I could stand here and lick…your lickle nipple aaalll day…just stand there and…laugh…and moan for mee…” I teased in between sending my tongue wrapping around the sides of her nipple.

“MMMMMNOOOHOOHOHOHO…” she wailed. I paused.

“Kitten, why do you say no? I thought you liked it when I did that.”

She looked at the floor again. “I d-do, Mistress. I can’t h-help it.”
 
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“I want you to say what you mean, do you understand me?” She just nodded. “Say what you want…” She looked down, unable to speak. I walked back around behind her, holding her midsection and teasing her belly very gently. “What’s wrong Kitten, it’s ok, you can tell me what you want…”

She wrapped her tail around her leg again and spoke; “M-M-mistress, will you p-please take off my p-pants? I’m so u-used to being almost n-naked…”

I chuckled. “But if I do that Kitten, I might be tempted to tickle you in even more places…” I teased as I ran one fingertip over each of her outstretched armpits.

“Y-Y-yes ma’am, I k-knohow” she giggled, nodding her head. I wrapped one hand around her midsection and unzipped her pants. With the other hand I started scratching her armpit harder.
“EEeehehehehheEHEHEHEOOHOHOMIHIHSTRESSS…THAHHANKYOHOU…” she laughed, trying to remain still as I pulled her shorts off, revealing the black thong I knew would be there. I stopped tickling. “Now Kitten, step back…” She did, and I pulled the shorts off and put them on the bed that was a few feet away.

“MMm…aaalll nice and naked for your mistress…that’s sooo cute…” I began wiggling my fingertips over her bare bum.

She squealed, pulling herself as far forward as she could. “Mihihstress, THAT tihihckles!!” she exclaimed, wiggling.

“Yes it does…and you LOVE it! Kitchy kitchy koo! Tickle tickle tickle!” slowly, I moved one hand down to pick the feather in my pocket and slowly pulled it out, sending it over her bum.

“WHEEEEEHEEEEEEHAHAHHAHHAAHAaAARGHAHAHAAHHHHHAAAAA” she squealed, arching her back as far as she could. “PLEHEHHASEHEHEHEHE BRHEHEEHEAKHEHEH!!!”

After a few more seconds of tracing along the muscle lines in her bum, I paused and stepped away. “Don’t go anywhere,” I teased, “I’ll be riiight back” I stepped into a closet, returning with a stool at about waist height.

I sat it right behind her, went over to the pulley that controlled the rope she was tied to, and lowered it a few inches. “Sit” I commanded.

She did so without argument. I sat at the foot of the stool, knees pulled in. “Feet.” I said, motioning to my knees.

“M-Mistress, please, you have no idea how bad my feet ahare…” she said, still slightly regaining her breath.

“Well, tell me. I’m not gonna laugh at ya about it sweetie” I winked up at her.

“W-well…when Master tickles me on my feet…sometimes I…” she trailed off, obviously embarrassed.

“You what…” I prompted, already knowing the answer.

“S-sometimes it m-makes me…really REALLY ho-horny.” She admitted, tail nearly cutting off the circulation in her leg.
I chuckled. “Is that something you’re uncomfortable with, Kitten?”

Her eyes widened. “Oh no, Mistress, I was just afraid you would be!”

I grinned, picking up her foot and running a finger down if softly. I saw her shudder and grin. “Not at all, Kitten.” I reassured softly. “Not at all.” With that, I started darting five fingertips up and down her soft sole, arch, and heel.

She squealed again, completely relaxed, barely able to keep herself sitting upright. “MEEEOOOOOWWHHEHEHEHEMMMMOHOH MIHIHSTREEHEHSS…” she wailed.

I paused, picking her foot up further to look at the bottom of it. “My my, Kitten, you certainly keep the bottoms of your feet clean.” I remarked.

“Oh yes’m, Master always likes clean feet.” She replied. I looked up at her, winked, and sent my tongue swirling down her sole.

“MMMMMEEEOOOOWRRRHRRHHHMMMMHEHEHEHEHEEH!!” she laughed, half between a bellow and a moan. I continued to lick up her sole and arch.

When I came to her toes, I began to lick each one individually, starting with the big toe. She was in silent laughter by this time. I began to nibble on her big toe and her eyes shot back open.

I paused. “Is there something you want to tell me, Kitten?” I asked innocently.

“M-Mistress…” she began, trying to get her breath back. “I-I’m so turned ohon right now…the f-foot licking just d-did it…” she trailed off. After a moment she regained most of her composure and continued;

“We Kats were made by Master Feathers, as you know. There’s one thing about us I’m not sure you know…we can’t…orgasm without our…Master or Mistresses express permission. And I’m SO turned on right now…” she trailed off. In her sitting position, her tail was unable to find her leg, so it was currently curled around her stomach to the point it looked painful.

I grinned. “Aww, is my ickle tickle slave a little warm and weeet, hmm?” I teased, grabbing her other foot. “Well, let’s see what we can do about that…” With that, I pulled both her feet between my knees, held them there, and sent five nails swirling up and down each foot. “Tickle tickle tickle my ickle horny lee!” I cooed.

By this point she was beyond words; she was in total, uncontrolled, laughter. “AHAHHAHAHAHHAHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHH…” she bellowed, not even wiggling in the slightest. After a few minutes of this torture, I stopped and let her rest.

“M-mistress…” she began after she rested. “Please…please, you have no idea how bad I need to cum…all you have to do is say yes…”

I grinned. “Soon, honey, soon. But first…stand up again.” I pulled the stool out as she did.

I walked over to my bag, which was still sitting on the bed. Good, I thought, It’s still here. I picked up my latest invention and walked back over to her and showed her the toy.

Her eyes widened as she took it in; it was a feather duster, but a special one. This one was mounted on one of those springy cat toys that kittens like to bat back and forth, so that the duster was on a spring pointing upwards. She knew immediately what it was for.

“Mistress…please…that’s torture…” she started to beg.

“Please what?” I asked.

She looked at me, then sighed, resigned. “P-please torture me and m-make me cum.” She said, revealing what she truly wanted.

I smiled. “As you wish.” With that, I pulled her black thong off, put the duster under her, and pulled it back, setting it swinging. The feather tips came just up to her bare crotch. Then I walked behind her, wrapped my arms around her, and began gently teasing her ribs and the sides of her breasts. “Kootchy kootchy, tickle tickle…” I began to chant in her ear.


”MEEEOOOOWRMMMMMMHEHEHEEEHETIIHICKLES TIHIHCKLES TICKLEHEHES!” she moaned. “OOH FEHEHEELS SOHOHO GOOOOOODDDD…” after a minute of this, she went limp, laughing silently.

“Good, good” I whispered in her ear. “Yes.” I quickly pulled the duster out from under her.

She arched her back, moaning softly, and orgasmed. I gave her a quick peck on the cheek.

“Oh...th-thank you, Mistress…” she panted. I smiled.

“Anytime, Kitten.”

I thought maybe my adventure in Hell had, at least for the moment, come to an end. But just then I heard the door open, and Feathers walked calmly in. I took a few steps back, letting him inspect his Kat.

“My my, my dear Kat, you’ve been weak.” He commented, looking at the puddle on the floor. He ran a finger over her bare stomach once.

She shuddered. “Oh-oh Master, I’m so sorry, she tortured me so bad, she even licked my foot, I couldn’t h-help it…” she stammered, obviously afraid of a second torturing.

Feathers, instead, put a finger over her mouth to shush her. Then he undid her cuffs, picked her up, and laid her on the bed. “Sleep now, my dear Kat. And happy birthday.”

“Oh…M-master…thank you…” she said before finally passing out.

“You let her off the hook, F. You’re getting soft.” I couldn’t help but tease after he turned back to me.

“Oh, I let her off the hook. She’s not the one Hell’s Justice is aimed at today.” He gave me ‘the look’. Everybody who’s ever lee’d knows that look. It’s the one that says “you’ve had it!.”

As he walked towards me, tentacles outstretched, I knew there would be no escape even if I had taken it. It seemed my adventure in Hell hadn’t quite come to a close after all.


THE END...?
 
Wow truely amazing hun......well you know what I think about this story.....
You've worked really hard on this and you deserve every credit for it 😎
*claps*well done hun....keep up the good work 😎
 
Wow. 0_0 After reading that, I nearly had to have a second cup of tea.

But seriously, great work! I'm muchos impressed. 😀 You certainly have a way with words!
 
There have been a lot of great tickle stories written, from "Melissa's Ordeal" to "Arab Tickle Torture" to "Ticklish Secretaries." This story belongs in the pantheon of greatness. This may be your first foray into more adult tickling stories, but you have shown a natural grasp of it here. I am a fan of the more playful tickling than the sexual tickling like that shown here, but I in no way object to this, and with your skilled hands writing them, look forward to more. I wholeheartedly recommend this one, and I'd hope there may be a sequel in the works, showing your further adventures in the land of the Tickle Daemon. 😀
 
Sockstickler said:
There have been a lot of great tickle stories written, from "Melissa's Ordeal" to "Arab Tickle Torture" to "Ticklish Secretaries." This story belongs in the pantheon of greatness. This may be your first foray into more adult tickling stories, but you have shown a natural grasp of it here. I am a fan of the more playful tickling than the sexual tickling like that shown here, but I in no way object to this, and with your skilled hands writing them, look forward to more. I wholeheartedly recommend this one, and I'd hope there may be a sequel in the works, showing your further adventures in the land of the Tickle Daemon. 😀


OMG that is just about the sweetest thing anyone's every said about my writing...thank you SO much buddy!!:super_hap
 
Sockstickler said:
There have been a lot of great tickle stories written, from "Melissa's Ordeal" to "Arab Tickle Torture" to "Ticklish Secretaries." This story belongs in the pantheon of greatness. This may be your first foray into more adult tickling stories, but you have shown a natural grasp of it here. I am a fan of the more playful tickling than the sexual tickling like that shown here, but I in no way object to this, and with your skilled hands writing them, look forward to more. I wholeheartedly recommend this one, and I'd hope there may be a sequel in the works, showing your further adventures in the land of the Tickle Daemon. 😀
LBH? Is that you? 😱

j/k 😛
 
Sockstickler said:
I'd hope there may be a sequel in the works, showing your further adventures in the land of the Tickle Daemon. 😀

Yeah I hope there will be more too....maybe one where you get some too Karen :tounge: 😉
 
Mandatory, eh? Y'mean you're insisting I do a story from the 'lee's perspective? *ponders* It's a stretch...but I might be able to work it out...It'll take a few days (or weeks) 'cuz my schedule's sooo friggin busy lately, but I'll start thinking on it. Thanks for the positive feedback all!!! :super_hap
 
Great piece Karen....though the two antagonists seem strangely familiar? :$ You handled a very delicate balance well. I think we would all love to see more and like Tickle Fan, I would love to read more about you as a lee. 😉 Really well done! 🙂
 
Feathers said:
Great piece Karen....though the two antagonists seem strangely familiar? :$ You handled a very delicate balance well. I think we would all love to see more and like Tickle Fan, I would love to read more about you as a lee. 😉 Really well done! 🙂

Hmm yea, wonder where you've seen the "antagonists" before? (didn't consider them that when writin it😉 )

Well, if there's enough demand for it, it shall be written...no matter how much razzing I'm bound to get 😀

Thanks for the feedback as always. You to, SS! :super_hap
 
Wow! Karen, that was amazing! You've definitely got an incredible gift for writing. Awesome work, kiddo. n_n
 
TKLVR18 said:
Well, if there's enough demand for it, it shall be written...no matter how much razzing I'm bound to get 😀

Does that mean you will write a sequel or that we've to sign a petition to get you to do it? 😀
 
Sammi-Thanks a ton girly!!! :super_hap

Irish-tis in the works😉
 
excellent job, Karen! really great job for a first story, and i like the size of it, the more the merrier. i can't wait for part 2 😀
 
Thanks, boys! Woke up with the idea for pt 2 this mornin, so it'll be up as soon as I can type it out; which, admittedly, may be a few days, but tis comin! :super_hap
 
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