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Necra cruel to Laurel (f/f, mini-comic)

Khali

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This was my entry for Sozokureed's 'Cruelty To Angels' contest. It features Reed's lovely angelic character Laurel in a bit of 'torturous peril'...at the hands of my original Egyptian-themed character Necra (or at least a 'version' of her) in a fitting dungeon somewhere.

2 pages...

The first page is actually a set of supplemental panels leading up the main image (page 2).
#1 - Necra, with a small smirk, coming up to the chained Laurel and holding up the strange metal glove/claw she's wearing on her left hand.
#2 - Laurel looks fearful as thin blades 'shak' out of the claw's fingers right in front of her eyes...this might hurt...
#3 - Laurel, eyes getting even wider, looks shocked and in terror as feathered barbs and plumes 'thup' out of the blade shafts in front of her face...this WILL 'hurt'!

Trying to put a bit of suspense, then fear, then full-blown surprise/shock/terror as the scene unfolds unexpectedly to lead into the real (tickle) 'torture', which is...

The second page is the main image, showing full-body shots of poor Laurel strung up by chains to her wrists and one of her fancy high heels into a very uncomfortable looking position. Not to mention a few other bondage...er...BANDAGES (heh, was Necra trying to mummify Laurel before the latter was tickled to death? ). Or, at least, it would be uncomfortable if Necra wasn't slashing the 'blades' of her metallic glove/claw against Laurel's smooth belly and sides...those ticklish feather-fingers might be as painful as blades to the ticklish angel. ^^

Necra, of course, is enjoying it as she stands there posing. And is that a small viper of some sort also getting into the act, lapping Laurel's inner (raised) leg?

A few random notes:
-Obviously Laurel's outfit fits the...situation.
-No, I have no idea HOW Necra's metallic skirt there stays on.
-Also on Necra, I was planning on her wings being more Horus-like, but the focus here is poor Laurel anyway. ^^
-Background is kinda iffy...eh, the characters are the main parts.
-A possible followup was going to involve a facet of that pose and, perhaps, Necra jealous of Laurel's fancy heels (though Nec's snake-themed ones aren't too shabby either ) and a different tickle target.

(as usual, linear versions of both pages are attached as well)

BTW, check out Sozokureed's DA gallery if you haven't before for some VERY nice artwork (non-tickling though). Laurel of course belongs to him.

Kh
 
Holy Fantastic Feathery Fingers!!!!!!!

Wow...

I mean W O W.

First of all the detail is amazing. I love the backgrounds, and the care you put into the outfits. I love the set up page and that moment of dawning comprehension when she realizes what is about to happen.

And, of course, the tickle action is wonderful.

As a long time fan of your work, I gotta say - this is just delightful.

Loveit. Absolutely LOVE it! :woot:

Best,

Bandito
 
Wonderful drawings, Khali. :bowing:
I love the bondage position in the second drawing. :devil:
 
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As always, you come up with some of the most fantastic tickle scenarios, Khali-chan. ^_^ Plus, I always love seeing your character work in whatever scenario you so choose.

Thanks for sharing---it made my day.
 
Fantastic work as always, Khali. I can never say enough good things about your art. :bowing:
 
Feather gloves: You really gotta love 'em! A great comic, and you know I always love your hand-drawn art!
 
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Bandito:
Heh, much thanks for all the comments. ^^ Similarly, my favorite two elements of these pics are the outfit designs and (Laurel's) expressions. 😉

Killalot:
Thanks.

Milagros:
Heh, heh. Well, I know it's a bit unusual of a position in image 2 really...it's meant to be both uncomfortable and...'a setup'. For both that little snake and a possible foot tickle (if there was another image, that is).

FF7Tickler:
You're welcome. Characterization was a tricky choice here, actually...I was totally unsure who the 'torturer' should be (although I did want to use one of my own characters). Necra is probably an odd choice as she's not seen a lot...but I had an Egyptian mood then. 🙂

Larcen Tyler:
True, cruel = fun sometimes.

Slacker2114:
Much thanks...and you can always say more about it. 😉

Zerit2002:
Thank you too for the nice comment...hopefully more drawings will come.

Grippedchimp:
Of course I do...they're even in a story I wrote for...oops. 😉 Anyway, thanks as well, although my drawn stuff seems to vary in whether I have inspiration or not lately.

Kh
 
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Yeah, I don't believe I've ever seen her before. I may be wrong though---that and I don't know about the private chat/messaging that goes on in which you probably share stuff as well. ^.^ But it was a nice choice, nevertheless. I look forward to mor efun.
 
Khali said:
Grippedchimp:
Of course I do...they're even in a story I wrote for...oops. 😉 Anyway, thanks as well, although my drawn stuff seems to vary in whether I have inspiration or not lately.


I know what you mean, Khali. Inspiration hasn't come to me for awhile for any new pics to render. Then again, when you're attempting to work on your drawing in RL, but getting rather frustrated at the same time, it's not easy to keep an artistic mind. (But I will keep at it I promise you.)
 
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