Nel Zelpher, for one who am of secret of state service, danger always lurk!!

[GARIMTO]

Such as is the fate of public servant. Though a satisfaction of life, perhaps this is outweighed by potential conflict? I, Garimto, must consider this carefully.

 

[smilepile]

Nice pic! 😀

As I am no artist at all and never posted pictures or anything here I know it is kind of weird being criticized by me. Anyways, as I always check out the Artwork sub-forum, I just wanted to post some constructive criticism:
I think your colouration is very good. But maybe you should work on your pencil drawing a little except it turned out exactly in the style you wanted it to be. I know some professional artists and I know criticism (especially by an non-artist) is nothing someone likes but be assure I don't mean it as offense at all.
I just think this already really good pic would be even better in a more detailed style. Maybe that's just me. 🙂

 

[GARIMTO]

As I, Garimto, am simply novice drawer and of not to am artist, such criticism is essential for spirit! As such, to represent thusly is critical. Yet I am not to quite understand; how so to am become improve on pencil, my friend? Such as a hard rock style, or soft like angel's touch? This, I, Garimto, do not understand.

 

[laughinggaszone]

As I, Garimto, am simply novice drawer and of not to am artist, such criticism is essential for spirit! As such, to represent thusly is critical. Yet I am not to quite understand; how so to am become improve on pencil, my friend? Such as a hard rock style, or soft like angel's touch? This, I, Garimto, do not understand.

You need to work on your anatomy, head, hands, feet, proportions, ect. Check out the "How do they do that" forum for tutorials. it's a subforum in the tickling art forum.
webmaster joe

 

[Kalamos]

Yet I am not to quite understand; how so to am become improve on pencil, my friend? Such as a hard rock style, or soft like angel's touch? This, I, Garimto, do not understand.

Seriously, man.
You crack me.

😉

 

[SharonP]

This picture reminds me of Pigtails.