New story idea (some will really hate it)

[SlaverTickler]

As some of you may have noticed I have become a slacker when it comes to my creative writing as of late. I have no real excuse for this, I have wanted to continue working on The Alphabet Tickler, but unfortunately I just haven't been able to focus on it. My life is a little up in the air as I have become the victim of a work place conspiracy and will be getting laid off soon.

Just so all is understood, and with out saying to much, I am a trades person employed by the government. I got the job because my father is a big shot in the union, and his "boss" (for lack of a better term) liked me and wanted to give me a shot at trade work. Life was hell from almost the start, the old guys were complete dicks to me, refusing to teach me anything, and then giving me shit for not knowing anything. Not wanting to be marked as a "Daddy's Boy" I sucked it up and took it in stride for the better part of 3 years, then I started telling people to fuck off. After I got my trade licence I was moved to a different department, and shortly after that a Supervisor position became available, so my boss decided to impress the higher powers by screwing me (the union guys kid) over. While I will admit I did make some dumb mistakes, the fact that one of my co-workers helped in my down fall pisses me off to know end.

This brings us to the meat of this post/thread. I plan on using this experience as inspiration for my next story. "Unconscionable" will be the most ruthless and erotic tickle torture/forced orgasm story I have ever written. It will be graphic and maybe even a little violent at times. It will feature mostly M/F, and some F/F content. Some people might be disgusted by what they read, and I hope they will understand that I would never actually do any of the stuff in this story, it is just a way for me to get it out of my system how pissed off I am with this scab bitch who fucked me over to gain favor with a boss.

I am going to start writing it soon, and I will just let the story progress naturally through my finger tips. I will not respond to comments to it (the story) though I do hope some people can relate to it as both a sort of therapy and maybe even art. I am sure some people out there can relate to the "Tickling for Revenge" as a theme, as well as writing as a form of therapy. I am just combing a theme with the therapy. I am posting this in hopes that people who are disturbed by why I wrote this will be able to understand and/or forgive me for it's content. I just need to get it out of my system, and this is my only method.

Thanks for reading
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[seanwoj]

Neat. Make her suffer!! (in the story of course)

 

[LD_Tickler]

"Unconscionable" will be the most ruthless and erotic tickle torture/forced orgasm story I have ever written. It will be graphic and maybe even a little violent at times.

Seeing as how there have been plenty of stories in the past that were completely merciless and very violent, I don't think you have anything to worry about.

 

[tkl-pen]

Sounds like a good story to me!

 

[SlaverTickler]

Thanks for the support. I am not planning on making it extreamly violent, at least not the M/F stuff (it will be mostly spanking), but there will be some who will likely be shocked at how far I may take this.

 

[MrTicklefeet]

And here you are apologizing for it before you even write it. Just write it, let it flow, don't worry about us, we're not important in the long run. Like Allen Ginsburg once said, "First thought, best thought".
I got fired as well by a co worker who wrote a few fictional complaints about me, and management sucked it up with no investigation. I could write such a revenge story, but that gal was not attractive in any sense of the word. There wouldn't be any tickling, but I have fantasized on phycological revenge. She ended up quitting before long, the stress of the fellow employees who took such a total dislike to her for her actions against me. No union, but I'm glad to be out of there, though I still don't know where the next job is going to be.
So just write what you feel. An apologetic preamble is not necessary, may hamper the creative process.

 

[SlaverTickler]

So just write what you feel. An apologetic preamble is not necessary, may hamper the creative process.

It won't hamper me, because now that I have gotten my motives off my chest I know that anybody who reads it is aware of what they are in for. It's sort of like going on the Howard Stern show, by now you should realize what you are in for, so you really have no business being offended by it. The funny thing is, now that I am on my way out, I find myself working with a great group of people.

On the topic of looks, this woman is a tall athletic beauty. It is a real shame she turned out to be such a bitch, but unfortunately attractive women can sometimes get away with being bitches, because they are so attractive. I will probably modify her look some what eye colour, hair colour etc...), but I will try to stay true to her over all body type. Like "A Man with a Maid" I won't get into great detail over what she did, unlike "A Man with a Maid" the humiliation and degradation will never end, or become desirable by my Alice... yeah I think I will call her Alice in tribute.

 

[Marquis De Sade]

Why won't you reply to comments?

 

[cinmac]

My Bf is a trades worker as well and, has been screwed over many
times over the years by male, and females. I know how u feel and how
its sucks. Sometimes writing about it really helps, just like talking about
it to someone. What goes around, comes around for those who have
screwed u over. I have seen it many times. Write ur revenge story my
friend. Write it the way u want it. No worries about us, we are all big,
girls and boys here. Hope all works out for you with ur job.

 

[SlaverTickler]

Why won't you reply to comments?

I just don't see the point. I hope people will like it, and I will read the feed back. However I know there will be (because some people are just like that) negative feed back on the level I plan to take this too. I plan on posting a link to this very thread at the start of each chapter, and put in big red letter "READ THIS FIRST". Any other story or series and I would, but this is pretty personal. Some will love it and others will hate it, but I want people to respect others opinions, I don't want ANY flaming over the content. Everyone can speak their mind on it, I don't care this time, it's mostly about bowing off steam through my writing.

 

[SlaverTickler]

My Bf is a trades worker as well and, has been screwed over many
times over the years by male, and females. I know how u feel and how
its sucks. Sometimes writing about it really helps, just like talking about
it to someone. What goes around, comes around for those who have
screwed u over. I have seen it many times. Write ur revenge story my
friend. Write it the way u want it. No worries about us, we are all big,
girls and boys here. Hope all works out for you with ur job.

When I worked in the factories my father was always on my ass about how it was a Go No Where job, and he was right. However in the 10 or so years I worked in these places (2) I felt a certain comradery with my co-workers. Even if somebody had an issue with you they wouldn't stick it in you back when it came to Us vs Them (workers and bosses). They might talk shit about you to another worker, or give you grief, but they had you back when push came to shove. While I have great respect for the abilities of Skilled Trades Workers there seems to be a lack of real "brotherhood" (forgive the gender bias please). I can't wait until I am laid of from this place, and I can get a job as a security guard.

 

[LD_Tickler]

I really do think you're worrying for nothing, or just trying to drum up hype 😉

Stories much more objectionable than what you seem to be planning are posted all the time.

 

[MrTicklefeet]

On the topic of looks, this woman is a tall athletic beauty. It is a real shame she turned out to be such a bitch, but unfortunately attractive women can sometimes get away with being bitches, because they are so attractive.

The woman who got me fired was short and stocky, and looked more like an older version of Moe Howard. Any revenge story I write wouldn't involve tickling. As she suffers from stress, I might get enjoyment out of hanging out at places I know she frequents, or banging on her bedroom window in the middle of the night and running away. You know, childish stuff.
However, she's in a much worse place than I am. I'm sure her imagination tortures her far worse than anything I could do.
Good luck on the story. Looking forward to reading it.

 

[SlaverTickler]

Stories much more objectionable than what you seem to be planning are posted all the time.

Probably, but I have never done anything like this befor so only time will tell.

 

[SlaverTickler]

Why won't you reply to comments?

I know this reply is a little late, but if you are talking about ones made on my Story Threads I try to reply to as many comments as I can. If I missed one by you I am sorry.