Of Course You Can - Complete Story w/Conclusion - F/m, M/f, sexual content

[SlaverTickler]

Thank you, Slaver--sorry it took so long to finish!

Don't sweat it Aura, things take time. Not everyone can sit at their computer typing for a few hours at a time. I know what it's like to work on something and even lose intrest for a while. I just wish my desire to write would come back.

 

[Mislaffsalot]

That is one of the best tickling stories I've ever had the pleasure to read! Thank you so much for taking the time to write it and share it with us! Hopefully you'll share more of your wonderful talent with us in the future!

 

[Marquis De Sade]

Oooo...thanks for showing this to me. This was absolutely scrumptiously delicious. It's a little different from your most recent in terms of the "Voice" - (is that even the right term?), but it's also a different story, different feel to it. So simple, so descriptive. The world you created was absolute. The characters entirely relateable. And buried in almost every simple paragrapgh is one of those special lines I wish I'd written. Like just the right amount of sprinkling of something to spice a dish up.

Can you tell I'm a little hungry? No lunch yet...🙄

I actually scribbled some lines down on a small Sticky-note I have on my desk because I couldn't Copy and Paste just one, but ran outta space. Lines like, "Lived to feel", "not trusting his voice", her mouth was releasing demons inside hime he hadn't even known existed" and many, many more.

Like Dave said, a lot of really good ones are almost too short. This was more than just a little scene with tickling in it, it was more of an entire film with a lot of thought and care put into it.

 

[TicklishS126]

Really Really Like this story. 😀 😀
Bookmarked!!

 

[Mistress Aura]

What a sweet and unexpected resurrection of this one!

TS126, I'm glad you were pleased. This was the first story I ever posted here; it's good to see it's managing to withstand the test of time.

And Marquis, as always, your praises are almost a little intimidating, but more than welcome. I think what makes it even more heart-warming is that you described doing on your sticky-note exactly what I do when I run across a written passage that's so perfect, it makes me squeal aloud just by how wonderfully the words go together...I thought I was a wee bit phreeque in that. So comforting to know I'm not the only one! 😀

Thanks again, to everyone who makes it through this one--it was a challenge to write and your appreciation makes it all worthwhile.

Mistress Aura

 

[Deleted member 66627]

And again.

 

[Swizzle Stick!]

This was so hot. Thank you Coda for making that list. I missed this story when it was bumped but am very happy I read it.

I love the role reversal! You put so much detail into this and not just the tickling but the characters and the emotions! I love this so much. This place never ceases to surprise me. The number of amazing stories I've read here is really surprising. You must put a lot of effort into something like this and I am beyond entertained. Please continue to write!

 

[baldadonis]

I'm rather late to the party here but I just found this story today. What a treasure it is to find a story so meticulously crafted with such precision and attention to detail. Stories like this remind that tickle fiction can be something quite special. The characters journey is so far, so unexpected, and yet so real. This story is such a great depiction of the strength of a truly strong friendship between two people with great love for each other. Certainly it's a reminder not to settle in life, just as you clearly did not settle short of creating something truly greatl. Well done Mistress Aura.

 

[Mistress Aura]

Unexpected Resurrection...

Once again, please allow me to say thank you to all of you who took the time to read (or reread) this and post your comments. It still means more to me than you'll know.

Bald, Marquis, Jo, and all the rest of you--thank you especially for your kind words. I'm sincerely thrilled that my efforts in creating something of this nature, something that transcends mere fetish materials and moves onto the next level, are recognized as just that.

Love you all, in the finest sense of the word. Srsly.

~ Mistress Aura