Poem 3(Breathless!!!)

[crydun]

This is the third poem I wrote for ticklish_latin. This is my favorite. I get a great visual image. I have posted it on here as you requested. Enjoy!!!

Breathless

At times, the thought of you
Brings me to my knees
Other times, a soft caress
Can put my mind at ease.

My feelings are so deep
I’m walking on the air
I wake up each morning
Hoping you’ll be there.

If I could, I’d climb a mountain
Stand upon its peak
And shout “I love you” to the sky
Till I could no more speak.

There I said it again!!!!!
I guess it bears repeating!

ticklish_latin:

you know the drill!!!!😀

 

[ticklish latin]

I love this one!

after reading all 3 again i definitely think you are a great poet...

 

[crydun]

only because I have something/someone great to write about!!!!

 

[ticklebunny 2]

I enjoyed reading your poem Breathless. It was really creative and very romantic. Loved reading it.😉 Your poetry is very inspiring and it cheers my weary soul and causes me to smile😀 Thanks for the great poetry that gave my heart the hug it needed. It cheered me that is for sure.

ticklebunny 2

 

[crydun]

thanks so much for your kind words. It lifted me up after that hard math class.

ticklishly yours,

crydun😀 😛

 

[ForgottenTcklr]

Crydun,

Can you explain the pretenses to your poems. Like, what are your intentions in these and what do they represent?

 

[Krokus]

Yea...

Excellent!! You have some serious talent! 😎