real life mother daughter

tickleterror · Jul 10, 2005

true story that only just happened and had to write about it a minute ago my neighbours a mother and daughter (18) were both sunbathing in their back garden and the mum got a leaf of the floor and stroked it across the daughters foot she jumped almost out of the sunbed shrieking and then later she did the same to her mum

ShadowTklr · Jul 10, 2005

No offense, but. . .

Holy crap! That's incredible. Please write a STORY about it so it will qualify for inclusion in this STORY section.

tickleterror · Jul 10, 2005

it is a non-fiction story but thanks for the idea and i am going to write a story about it now

Newdud23 · Jul 11, 2005

Great to know, and I hope someone does make it a story.

tickleterror · Jul 13, 2005

heres the story as promised its pretty short but let me know what you think

it was a hot summer day and Ally was visiting her mother, they had been chatting for a while and decided to make the most of the weather by sunbathing. Ally's mother got changed into a bikini and ally herself being not very shy just took her top off and sunbathed in her bra. Ally's mother was called Caroline and her top was black and strapless with a turquoise thong. soon after they started Ally was falling asleep face downtanning her back and lower legs which peeked barefoot out of the bottom of her skirt Caroline noticed that her daughter was falling asleep but didnt care because they had the kind of relationship where they were very close. She grabbed a leaf off the floor, it was a thin leaf from her hedge, she slowly reached over to her daughters feet and stroked the leaf across the sole of her right foot from heel down to toe. Immediately Ally squealed and pulled her foot back caroline laughed at her daughters reaction.
"You may laugh but it was not funny you know how ticklish my feet are."
About half hour after the first incident Caroline had fallen asleep so Ally seized the chance for some revenge. She sneaked inside and grabbed some nylons out of her mother chest of drawers and quickly made her way back out into the garden where she used the nylons to gently tie her mothers feet to the sunbed at the ankles, she then tied her wrists to the top slats of the sunbed with some more nylons, when she was done she stepped bac kto admire her work. then she picked up the leaf from the floor and moved to Caroline's feet. she slowly snaked the leaf's tip down carolinse right foot then back up her left foot making her mothers feet twitch. angered that she had not woken up she carefully spread open her mothers toes and started to saw the leaf across the sensitive soft webbing. This had the desired effect and Caroline woke with a jolt then started screaming as she felt her feetand realised she couldn't move. HAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHA NOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOOT MY FEEEEEEEEEEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHHEHEHEEEEET. Ally heard her mother's screams and stopped the tickling.
"Well Mum it's time for revenge lets see just how ticklish your feet are." as she finished she started to snake along the feet again HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAAAHHAPLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE NO STOOOOOOOOP TICKLING MY FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET! Ally tickled her mothers feet with the leaf for 5 minutes then switched to fingers for 10 minutes.
well as i said it was quite short but feedback is welcomed

ShadowTklr · Jul 13, 2005

Well, it's an interesting attempt, however, if you don't mind my saying, it lacks many necessary components required for it to be a story. I am glad that you decided to apply yourself though, and thank you for your effort. <<<<----

ViperGTS · Jul 13, 2005

Dude, if you wanna start writing stories, you gots to sit down and read through some of the stories already here. You'll get plenty of ideas.

tickleterror · Jul 13, 2005

i have already written what i would consider proper stories but i quickly wrote this based on what happened in reality but embelished slightly because someone asked for it to be made a story